英语作文闪光句+漂亮搭配技巧
写在前头：
期末考试这一转眼就要到了，由于这次考试都是150分制，也就是说英语作文部分要占到跟高考一样比例的25分而非原来的10分，想要拿高分也就绝对不像原来写10分作文一样语法通顺课本句子单词用用就能得个比较高的分数，毕竟14分左右的作文和22、23分的作文将近10分的差距也是不容忽视的。为了帮助大家（还有我自己……）短时间内能掌握一些比较闪光比较让阅卷老师眼前一亮的句子，特地把平时堆积的一些英语素材里的好词好句挖出来整理了一下，有些也就直接穿插在文本中间，希望大家真地用心去看，去背，去用，哪怕考试因为这里面的一句话帮作文高了个2分3分咱也心满意足了！~ 呐废话不多说，开始这趟愉快的作文之旅-v-
一、开头类：
语文作文常言题好一半文，英语也一样，好的开头也就是一篇成功作文的一半，a good beginning is half done, 想想阅卷老师要批全年级噶许多作文，如果每篇上来都像串通好了一样的I think I think, 这会是如何郁闷的感觉= =，always put yourself in the other’s shoes, 写作文的时候也要换位思考，替批分的老师想想阿四。如果这个老师，在进行了一上午枯燥的批阅过程后，猛然间，读到一个缤纷绚烂的开头，被深深shock 到，被deeply impressed到, 那会是何等的惊艳！下面就来欣赏一些容易吸引眼球的闪亮开头。
开头公式一：名人名言+谚语俗语
有人问了，“我没有记住名言，怎么办？尤其是英语名言？”，很好办：编! 尽管编! 但是一定要听起来很有道理呦！而且没准将来我们就是名人呢！对吧？不过要记住，一篇120字左右的作文里，出现1-2句名言点缀一下即可，切忌为求华丽生搬硬套，那样只会成为你的累赘，在老师眼里也只是一种显摆的行为，不讨巧。
在用到名言的时候，大致有这么4种写
1. A proverb says，„„
2. It goes without saying that „„
3. As a classic proverb goes that „„（推荐！as a proverb/saying goes几乎人人会用，但加上个classic 味道一下子就不一样了！）
4.there is much truth in the saying “„„”（俗话说得好„„）
5. cited as saying，“……” 援引„„的话（这个比较漂亮，用的人也相对较少，推荐！）
推荐背诵的名人名言+谚语：
在论述努力学习一类的作文中可用到以下这些
Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。（强调多做练习的重要性……）
Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。（学习要坚持不懈）
It's never too old to learn. 活到老，学到老。
A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行始于足下。（强调脚踏实地的重要性）
Action speaks louder than words. 行动胜过语言。（学习，是要去做的）
Experience is the mother of wisdom. 实践出真知。（做学问要实践） Rome was not built in a day. 伟业非一日之功。（学习是个积累的过程）
One false step will make a great difference. 失之毫厘，谬之千里。（强调治学要严谨）
An idle 闲散的 youth, a needy 贫困的 age. 少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。（不好好学习你就悲剧了）
As a man sows, so shall he reap. 种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆。（声明天道酬勤的真理）
All work and no play makes jack a dull boy. 只工作不休息，聪明孩子也变傻。（也要说说学习不能过度）
刚学完的O6课文提倡健康不要一味注重外表美，前面的O2也是这个主题，搞不好考试作文也出，下面就来看看关于外表的一些名句+谚语
Beauty will buy no beef. 漂亮不能当饭吃。
Beauty is only skin-deep. 美貌不过一张皮
Beauty without virtue is like a rose without fragrance. 无德之美犹如无香之玫瑰，徒有其表。
Good looks are not a must. 美貌并非必需
A fine coat does not make a gentleman. 衣着并不能装扮出一个君子
Never judge a book by its cover. 不可以貌取人
开头公式二：数字统计，用报告说话
要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。
原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的，可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一，但编无妨，只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型：
1. According to a recent survey,
2. A recent statistics shows that „„
3. A recent survey reveal ed that ……
开头公式三：描述身边现象/生活现状/社会现象
在写到一些要求对某类热点民生话题的作文时，开头可以这样写
1. An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that ……（比如意识到环保、节能、低碳的重要性）
2. Many individuals, if not the most , harbor the idea that …… （比较高阶的一种，词漂亮又有插入语，推荐！）
3. Now, it is generally accepted/commonly thought that ……
4. There is a growing tendency for …… to do ……（„„开始呈现上升趋势） 5. Nowadays, many people are living under the idea/illusion/thought that ……
6. …… has caused wide public concern recent years（描述某件引起广泛关注的话题时）
7. There is a general debate on/over ……Heated /hot debates have been stirred up these day/recently（写到有争议的话题时）
8. „„ is now being questioned by more and more/a increasing number of people（写到某些举措不得人心，或者你持反对态度的时候，可以这么写）
开头公式四：介绍某些人、事、物
1. When speaking of/When it comes to ……（万能公式）
2. „„，described as „„，is „„
e.g. Microblog, described as an entire new form of communication, has now caught on quickly among teenagers by enabling the users to update their latest status within just a few words.
3. It seems that …… is ……（sweeping the world/catching on/becoming popular overnight）（比如说说科技的飞速发展，电脑、网络的兴起等等）
4. For many/most of us, …… is ……
e.g. For most of us, a drink of water is just a matter of turning on a tap.
开头公式五：气势磅礴的排比
1. For ……,it is …… .For ……, it is …… .And for ……，it is……（从多方面多角度去描述你要写的东西，前两个要为第三个蓄势，观点最后亮）
e.g. For baseball fans, 2009 was the year of the Yankees. For job seekers, it was the year of the Great Recession. And for people who track baby names, it was the year of the vampire.
2. What do you …… but ……?What …… but ……？What …… but ……？（在想要勾起读者兴趣，增强文章互动性时可用这个，不同于上句的层层递进式，这个句式偏重三句并列）
e.g. What do you use every single day, but never pay for? What is truly yours but came from somewhere else? What is very personal but shared with everyone? The answer? It’s your name.
3. …… is a ……，a ……, a ……（递进式）
e.g. First love, is a surge of adrenalin, a rush of blood, a thing of innocence and pain that lasts a lifetime.
初恋是情感巨浪的汹涌，是情感在热血中的奔流，是情感纯真的表露，亦是一生中永恒的伤痛
开头公式六：回忆式开头
回忆式的写法的作用就相当于语文中的倒叙，用你的开头将读者带回到当时的情景，用在叙述一件事情的作文中效果尤其好
1. I never forget/remember/bear in mind the …… day when ……
e.g. I never forget the sweet day when we walked down the street hand in hand.
2. I remember some words said by +某位名人或熟知的人 e.g. I remember some words by the third President of the United States, „„
3. Once upon a time …… was just a ……（用于强调某人某物今非昔比时） e.g. Once upon a time Liubei was just a peddler selling straw sandals.
曾经刘备也只是个卖草鞋的小贩
4. There was a time when I/we/you did sth
e.g. There was a time when we met with a series of disasters but we didn’t let go our hope.
5. There are very few things/people I truly love/hate in life.（few 表达你对该事物的特殊感情，再用truly 进一步强调，接着要做的就是开始具体叙述你所要写之事）
开头公式七：否定句开头
有时候否定句起到的强调效果往往要好于肯定句，也更具有文采
1. Perhaps no one/nothing else （on Earth/in history）has such a „„ as „„（用来强调描写对象的独一无二）
e.g. Perhaps no one else on Earth has such an affinity with the North Pole as Jean-Louis Etienne.
也许这个世界上没有人会像Jean-Louis Etienne那样与北极有过如此亲密的接触 2. There aren‟t many …… （people/teenagers/citizens）who have had the honor/chance to ……
e.g. There aren’t very many US citizens who have had the honor to meet a president, let alone a kid from a foreign country.
3. No …… has received more praise and abuse than …… e.g. No invention has received more praise and abuse than computer.
开头公式八：强大的倒装句
相比前几种开头，倒装句式更能显示一个人的英语功底，同时因为用它的人相对较少，也更能博得阅卷老师“欢心” 1. Never before in history has （the issue of ） …… been more ……（controversial; serious; appealing） than now（十分强大的一个句式，既有倒装又有双重否定，极力推荐！）
e.g. Never before in history has the issue of overpopulation been more evident than now.
e.g. Never before in history has the relationship between China and Japan been more hopeful than now.
中日两国关系从没像现在这么乐观过/中日两国关系空前乐观
2. Gone are the days when ……was/were; did/could do（！！！强大句型！抒情记叙说明文通用！此句一出如同必杀>
e.g. Gone are the days when we strived, we laughed and cried together with Deng. e.g. Gone are the days when we could release the greenhouse gases without a second thought.
开头部分小结：
一般大多数情况下能够套用的格式大致有以上这么多种，但所谓水无常形兵无常势，创作的力量是无
穷的，在灵感如涌泉，文思如尿崩的时候也不妨用自己独一无二的搭配写出一个独一无二的开头，要知道，作文写到最高境界就是没有公式，自成一派，信手拈来。毕竟人是活的，公式是死的，公式只是为你提供一个结构，就像一块优质的画布，但颜料还得你自己往上涂。
二、文章内容类：
光有个漂亮的开头还远远不够哦，文章的中间部分也就是猪肚环节同样要写得充实潇洒，不然配在一个光鲜的开头下面，不但不能相得益彰反而显得干瘪无力，让老师的印象分也骤然下降。那接下来我们就看看如何将这“大头”部分写得出彩。
要在内容部分得高分，用到的技巧大约有这几种：长短句交叉、使用插入语、用词多样准确生动又形象、关键词灵活换用不重复、句型使用多样表述地道
内容技巧一：华丽丽的长短句
写长短句的宗旨，一张一弛，文武之道，一长一短，长句在前短句后，通篇长句累死读者，通篇短句不够刺激，长句华丽短句简洁，穿插着用方为王道
这类句子是跟着你行文内容走的，没有什么固定公式可以套，其精髓在于多用从句，顺带着插入一些短语进一步修饰。但一些优秀的长句你可以刻意去学，去模仿，然后灵活运用到自己的文章中去, 至于短句部分言简意赅地跟在长句后即可。下面就拿某W 的Comment 中的漂亮长句为例 1. These delicate sentences said by Audrey Hepburn, who is widely recognized as one of the most beautiful women, aim at one topic: it is one‟s inner beauty that really counts.（非限制性定从，放在句子中间修饰中心词sentences, 显然要比直接+aim at好得多）
2. Backham, who has been a legend in his time, will definitely be an immortal, even though he might no longer be striving on the sparkling pitch.（一个非限制性定从+ 一个让步状语从句）
3. However, flows of advertisements will not only impact the producer‟s image, but also make the potential customers bored and even spoil the advertising program.（not only „„ but also也是写长句时的主力 军！）
4. Wherever they go or whatever they do, they always bear in mind that they are messengers of peace, represen ting China.
（bear „„in mind, 一个宾从&现在分词作状语）
5. Almost at the same time the news came that people in drought-stricken south-western China are facing horrible shortage of drinking water, people in the rest part of China joined hands to donate water and other resources, hop ing to give a hand to those in trouble and be no onlooker.决不袖手旁观（有1个时间状语从句+1个同位语从句+1个名词&动词过去式构成的复合形容词+1个现在分词作目的状语，be no+名词表决不，动词搭配又合理，可谓长句中的典范）
第6句为某E 同学Comment 中的一句长句，大家把它和第5句对照着看，对照着学
6．Even though Zhao has been handsomely compensated 650,000 yuan by government, which is expected to be more, this financial compensation still can not hold a candle to无法与„„相提并论 Zhao‟s 11 years‟ torturous and freedom-lost prison life, thus confirming the saying that, “Money is not everything” .（让步状从+非限制性定从+复合形容词+现在分词作结果状语+引用谚语）
7. Sunshangxiang stood out as a dazzling pearl from quantities of distinct historical figures, confirming the saying that, „Women are no inferior to men‟. （现在分词作结果状语与引用名言的完美结合，推荐）
内容技巧二：神出鬼没的插入语
为嘛要用插入语？短句中用插入语，可以充更多字数，中长句中间用插入语，让句式更整齐美观 来看一些典型的插入语
单词作插入语，如：besides, however, otherwise, therefore, though
1.On the other hand, however , computer is not without its defects/disadvantages. （however 作插入语，作无论如何/但是的意思，是最常用的一个插入语）
2. We should, therefore , take advantage of the fruits of computers and avoid the opposite facet 方面.
（therefore 作插入语，使用的频率也非常之高，同时，上句中用fruits 代替了advantages, 避免了前后重复并且相当之形象）
短语作插入语，如for example, by the way, in other words, so far, as a matter of fact, as a result等等
1. China and India, for example, are neighbours. 2. The United Nations are calling for more environment-friendly actions, in other words, they are demanding that people all over the world （should ）switch to green products and do their bit to protect the earth.
内容技巧三：适当用被动替换主动
适当用被动句，更能反映客观事实，如： 1. Attention should be paid to 替换 We should pay attention to
2. Immediate/Instant/Effective measures should/is needed to be taken/carried out to „„ 替换 We should take immediate measures to …… 3. Great/Joint effort should be made to …… 替换 We should make great/joint effort to „„ 4. It should be pointed out that/It should 替换never be neglected/overlooked/ignored that ……I must point out that ……/ We should never neglect/overlook/ignore that ……
5. We are brought up to believe that …… 替换 We firmly believe that „„
内容技巧四：关键词、高频词句的表达多样性
一遍新、两遍厌，好曲不能听三遍，同样地，再精彩的单词被你反复用来用去，语势就要弱很多。相反，若能在表达同一个意思时切换用不同的近义词，不但给人耳目一新之感，也大大增加文章整体的文采。但使用时也要注意，不要刻意追求难词深词高级词，要是写出来一篇作文通篇全是专六专八的单词，批卷老师查金山词霸都来不及还帮你批好分数？
下面来看对于表达同一个意思，有多少种不同的写法（最土的写法放最后的括号里）
1. 我（个人）认为：
For my part；
From my point of view/From my perspective；
Personally speaking；
Personally I maintain that ……;
I （firmly ） hold the view that……；
In my humble opinion ;
I‟m of the opinion that ……
（In my opinion & I think）
2. 大多数人认为、知道 Many, if not most/Most, if not all, harbor the idea that ……；The majority of the people/Many individuals take the attitude that ……；
It‟s universally/widely accepted/acknowledged that ……； It‟s shared by a large number of people that ……； There‟s no one but knows that ……
（Many people think that……）
3. „„越来越流行
to become increasingly popular;
…… gain growing popularity;
……is increasingly appealing to;
……is catching on a increasing/growing number of people （……is more and more popular）
4. 关注„„，重视„„
pour attention into …… ;
take …… into account;
take …… into consideration;
be concerned with/about;
keep oneself （well ）informed of;
become aware of/that ……；
（pay attention to/put emphasis on）
5. 据我所知，„„
to the best of my knowledge;
for all I know/ for what I can tell
（as far as I know）
6. 做„„是有好处的、有帮助的
It pays to ……;
It‟s rewarding to ……; It‟s of great benefit to ……;
One can reap huge fruits from ……
（it’s good/helpful to……）
7. „„导致了
give rise to;
……（greatly ）contribute to……；
…… is a major contributor to ……;
……lead to ……; ……result in ……
（„„cause „„）
8. 喜爱„„, 热衷于„„
take a fancy to /have a fancy for „„
have an affection for „„
have a love affair with
be fond of/be keen on/be keen about „„ be obsessed with „„
（like……）
9. 凡事都有两面性
No garden has no weeds
Everything has its pluses and minuses
Everything cuts both ways
…… is a double-edged sword
We should not be blind to the other side of …… （every coin has two sides ）
10. 努力做某事、尽某人之力做某事
do everything in one‟s power to ……
take pains to do
spare no effort/ make an effort to do
do one‟s utmost to ……
go all out to do ……
do one‟s bit to ……
（try one’s best to do）
11. „„ 不尽如人意
…… has/leaves a lot to be desired
…… fails to meet/satisfy one‟s need/demand/requirement
…… is far from satisfactory
…… doesn‟t come up to one‟s expectations
（„„is undesirable）
12. „„就是个极好的例子，„„恰好能说明我的观点
„„ is such a prime example
we can cite …… as an excellent example of
„„ perfectly fits/illustrates my idea/description of„„
„„ perfectly serve my purpose
（for example，……）
13. 在某种程度上
at some point
to some extent/degree; to a certain extent/degree
in a sort of way
in part
in a sense
（partly ）
14. „„ 无法与„„相提并论；„„与„„相差甚远
…… can‟t not even hold a candle to ……
…… pales into insignificance when compared with ……
…… is not in the same class with ……
…… can‟t rival …… in ……
there‟s no comparison between …… and ……
…… can never approach ……
三、结尾类：
结尾公式一：我们得出了这样的结论……
说要说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，领导长篇大论，到最后也得冒出个“总而言之”之类的话。也就是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子： 1. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw/come to/reach/arrive at the conclusion that …… （议论类文章的万金油式句型，非常正规、书面，不过略微缺乏新意） 2. Thus, it can be included that ……/ we can find that ……
3. Needless to say/Admittedly/Obviously, ……（如果读者很难“显而见之”，但说无妨，就当读者的眼光太浅罢了！） 4. The ample 充分的 evidence presented enables us to reasonably conc lude that ……（成熟老练，中规中矩）
5. Therefore, it‟s quite reasonable for me/us to assume that ……（总结完之后，来点美好的期盼，尽情地去YY ）
结尾公式二：我们提出了以下建议……
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了。换言之，这类结尾就是在高歌，明天会更好~
1. Therefore/Thus, it is high time that we did ……（提建议还用个虚拟！很拽很
高级！！！）
2. Accordingly , I recommend that ……（some measures should be taken ）（于是乎„„我建议„„）
3. Consequently, to solve the problem, I‟d like to give my advice/suggestion that ……（都已经想着如何帮人家解决困难了，多么实际一孩子„„）
写在后头：
这份作文素材整理，花费了咱大量时间和心血才完成> 目的无他，希望大家充分利用好里面漂亮的词句，将自己的作文修饰地更加精美。限于时间原因和本人能力有限，有些部分可能整理得并不十分充
分，就当是抛砖引玉，为大家提供一个参考的框架吧~ 期末考试就要来咯，谨以此与诸位共勉！
英语作文闪光句+漂亮搭配技巧
写在前头：
期末考试这一转眼就要到了，由于这次考试都是150分制，也就是说英语作文部分要占到跟高考一样比例的25分而非原来的10分，想要拿高分也就绝对不像原来写10分作文一样语法通顺课本句子单词用用就能得个比较高的分数，毕竟14分左右的作文和22、23分的作文将近10分的差距也是不容忽视的。为了帮助大家（还有我自己……）短时间内能掌握一些比较闪光比较让阅卷老师眼前一亮的句子，特地把平时堆积的一些英语素材里的好词好句挖出来整理了一下，有些也就直接穿插在文本中间，希望大家真地用心去看，去背，去用，哪怕考试因为这里面的一句话帮作文高了个2分3分咱也心满意足了！~ 呐废话不多说，开始这趟愉快的作文之旅-v-
一、开头类：
语文作文常言题好一半文，英语也一样，好的开头也就是一篇成功作文的一半，a good beginning is half done, 想想阅卷老师要批全年级噶许多作文，如果每篇上来都像串通好了一样的I think I think, 这会是如何郁闷的感觉= =，always put yourself in the other’s shoes, 写作文的时候也要换位思考，替批分的老师想想阿四。如果这个老师，在进行了一上午枯燥的批阅过程后，猛然间，读到一个缤纷绚烂的开头，被深深shock 到，被deeply impressed到, 那会是何等的惊艳！下面就来欣赏一些容易吸引眼球的闪亮开头。
开头公式一：名人名言+谚语俗语
有人问了，“我没有记住名言，怎么办？尤其是英语名言？”，很好办：编! 尽管编! 但是一定要听起来很有道理呦！而且没准将来我们就是名人呢！对吧？不过要记住，一篇120字左右的作文里，出现1-2句名言点缀一下即可，切忌为求华丽生搬硬套，那样只会成为你的累赘，在老师眼里也只是一种显摆的行为，不讨巧。
在用到名言的时候，大致有这么4种写
1. A proverb says，„„
2. It goes without saying that „„
3. As a classic proverb goes that „„（推荐！as a proverb/saying goes几乎人人会用，但加上个classic 味道一下子就不一样了！）
4.there is much truth in the saying “„„”（俗话说得好„„）
5. cited as saying，“……” 援引„„的话（这个比较漂亮，用的人也相对较少，推荐！）
推荐背诵的名人名言+谚语：
在论述努力学习一类的作文中可用到以下这些
Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。（强调多做练习的重要性……）
Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。（学习要坚持不懈）
It's never too old to learn. 活到老，学到老。
A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行始于足下。（强调脚踏实地的重要性）
Action speaks louder than words. 行动胜过语言。（学习，是要去做的）
Experience is the mother of wisdom. 实践出真知。（做学问要实践） Rome was not built in a day. 伟业非一日之功。（学习是个积累的过程）
One false step will make a great difference. 失之毫厘，谬之千里。（强调治学要严谨）
An idle 闲散的 youth, a needy 贫困的 age. 少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。（不好好学习你就悲剧了）
As a man sows, so shall he reap. 种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆。（声明天道酬勤的真理）
All work and no play makes jack a dull boy. 只工作不休息，聪明孩子也变傻。（也要说说学习不能过度）
刚学完的O6课文提倡健康不要一味注重外表美，前面的O2也是这个主题，搞不好考试作文也出，下面就来看看关于外表的一些名句+谚语
Beauty will buy no beef. 漂亮不能当饭吃。
Beauty is only skin-deep. 美貌不过一张皮
Beauty without virtue is like a rose without fragrance. 无德之美犹如无香之玫瑰，徒有其表。
Good looks are not a must. 美貌并非必需
A fine coat does not make a gentleman. 衣着并不能装扮出一个君子
Never judge a book by its cover. 不可以貌取人
开头公式二：数字统计，用报告说话
要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。
原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的，可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一，但编无妨，只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型：
1. According to a recent survey,
2. A recent statistics shows that „„
3. A recent survey reveal ed that ……
开头公式三：描述身边现象/生活现状/社会现象
在写到一些要求对某类热点民生话题的作文时，开头可以这样写
1. An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that ……（比如意识到环保、节能、低碳的重要性）
2. Many individuals, if not the most , harbor the idea that …… （比较高阶的一种，词漂亮又有插入语，推荐！）
3. Now, it is generally accepted/commonly thought that ……
4. There is a growing tendency for …… to do ……（„„开始呈现上升趋势） 5. Nowadays, many people are living under the idea/illusion/thought that ……
6. …… has caused wide public concern recent years（描述某件引起广泛关注的话题时）
7. There is a general debate on/over ……Heated /hot debates have been stirred up these day/recently（写到有争议的话题时）
8. „„ is now being questioned by more and more/a increasing number of people（写到某些举措不得人心，或者你持反对态度的时候，可以这么写）
开头公式四：介绍某些人、事、物
1. When speaking of/When it comes to ……（万能公式）
2. „„，described as „„，is „„
e.g. Microblog, described as an entire new form of communication, has now caught on quickly among teenagers by enabling the users to update their latest status within just a few words.
3. It seems that …… is ……（sweeping the world/catching on/becoming popular overnight）（比如说说科技的飞速发展，电脑、网络的兴起等等）
4. For many/most of us, …… is ……
e.g. For most of us, a drink of water is just a matter of turning on a tap.
开头公式五：气势磅礴的排比
1. For ……,it is …… .For ……, it is …… .And for ……，it is……（从多方面多角度去描述你要写的东西，前两个要为第三个蓄势，观点最后亮）
e.g. For baseball fans, 2009 was the year of the Yankees. For job seekers, it was the year of the Great Recession. And for people who track baby names, it was the year of the vampire.
2. What do you …… but ……?What …… but ……？What …… but ……？（在想要勾起读者兴趣，增强文章互动性时可用这个，不同于上句的层层递进式，这个句式偏重三句并列）
e.g. What do you use every single day, but never pay for? What is truly yours but came from somewhere else? What is very personal but shared with everyone? The answer? It’s your name.
3. …… is a ……，a ……, a ……（递进式）
e.g. First love, is a surge of adrenalin, a rush of blood, a thing of innocence and pain that lasts a lifetime.
初恋是情感巨浪的汹涌，是情感在热血中的奔流，是情感纯真的表露，亦是一生中永恒的伤痛
开头公式六：回忆式开头
回忆式的写法的作用就相当于语文中的倒叙，用你的开头将读者带回到当时的情景，用在叙述一件事情的作文中效果尤其好
1. I never forget/remember/bear in mind the …… day when ……
e.g. I never forget the sweet day when we walked down the street hand in hand.
2. I remember some words said by +某位名人或熟知的人 e.g. I remember some words by the third President of the United States, „„
3. Once upon a time …… was just a ……（用于强调某人某物今非昔比时） e.g. Once upon a time Liubei was just a peddler selling straw sandals.
曾经刘备也只是个卖草鞋的小贩
4. There was a time when I/we/you did sth
e.g. There was a time when we met with a series of disasters but we didn’t let go our hope.
5. There are very few things/people I truly love/hate in life.（few 表达你对该事物的特殊感情，再用truly 进一步强调，接着要做的就是开始具体叙述你所要写之事）
开头公式七：否定句开头
有时候否定句起到的强调效果往往要好于肯定句，也更具有文采
1. Perhaps no one/nothing else （on Earth/in history）has such a „„ as „„（用来强调描写对象的独一无二）
e.g. Perhaps no one else on Earth has such an affinity with the North Pole as Jean-Louis Etienne.
也许这个世界上没有人会像Jean-Louis Etienne那样与北极有过如此亲密的接触 2. There aren‟t many …… （people/teenagers/citizens）who have had the honor/chance to ……
e.g. There aren’t very many US citizens who have had the honor to meet a president, let alone a kid from a foreign country.
3. No …… has received more praise and abuse than …… e.g. No invention has received more praise and abuse than computer.
开头公式八：强大的倒装句
相比前几种开头，倒装句式更能显示一个人的英语功底，同时因为用它的人相对较少，也更能博得阅卷老师“欢心” 1. Never before in history has （the issue of ） …… been more ……（controversial; serious; appealing） than now（十分强大的一个句式，既有倒装又有双重否定，极力推荐！）
e.g. Never before in history has the issue of overpopulation been more evident than now.
e.g. Never before in history has the relationship between China and Japan been more hopeful than now.
中日两国关系从没像现在这么乐观过/中日两国关系空前乐观
2. Gone are the days when ……was/were; did/could do（！！！强大句型！抒情记叙说明文通用！此句一出如同必杀>
e.g. Gone are the days when we strived, we laughed and cried together with Deng. e.g. Gone are the days when we could release the greenhouse gases without a second thought.
开头部分小结：
一般大多数情况下能够套用的格式大致有以上这么多种，但所谓水无常形兵无常势，创作的力量是无
穷的，在灵感如涌泉，文思如尿崩的时候也不妨用自己独一无二的搭配写出一个独一无二的开头，要知道，作文写到最高境界就是没有公式，自成一派，信手拈来。毕竟人是活的，公式是死的，公式只是为你提供一个结构，就像一块优质的画布，但颜料还得你自己往上涂。
二、文章内容类：
光有个漂亮的开头还远远不够哦，文章的中间部分也就是猪肚环节同样要写得充实潇洒，不然配在一个光鲜的开头下面，不但不能相得益彰反而显得干瘪无力，让老师的印象分也骤然下降。那接下来我们就看看如何将这“大头”部分写得出彩。
要在内容部分得高分，用到的技巧大约有这几种：长短句交叉、使用插入语、用词多样准确生动又形象、关键词灵活换用不重复、句型使用多样表述地道
内容技巧一：华丽丽的长短句
写长短句的宗旨，一张一弛，文武之道，一长一短，长句在前短句后，通篇长句累死读者，通篇短句不够刺激，长句华丽短句简洁，穿插着用方为王道
这类句子是跟着你行文内容走的，没有什么固定公式可以套，其精髓在于多用从句，顺带着插入一些短语进一步修饰。但一些优秀的长句你可以刻意去学，去模仿，然后灵活运用到自己的文章中去, 至于短句部分言简意赅地跟在长句后即可。下面就拿某W 的Comment 中的漂亮长句为例 1. These delicate sentences said by Audrey Hepburn, who is widely recognized as one of the most beautiful women, aim at one topic: it is one‟s inner beauty that really counts.（非限制性定从，放在句子中间修饰中心词sentences, 显然要比直接+aim at好得多）
2. Backham, who has been a legend in his time, will definitely be an immortal, even though he might no longer be striving on the sparkling pitch.（一个非限制性定从+ 一个让步状语从句）
3. However, flows of advertisements will not only impact the producer‟s image, but also make the potential customers bored and even spoil the advertising program.（not only „„ but also也是写长句时的主力 军！）
4. Wherever they go or whatever they do, they always bear in mind that they are messengers of peace, represen ting China.
（bear „„in mind, 一个宾从&现在分词作状语）
5. Almost at the same time the news came that people in drought-stricken south-western China are facing horrible shortage of drinking water, people in the rest part of China joined hands to donate water and other resources, hop ing to give a hand to those in trouble and be no onlooker.决不袖手旁观（有1个时间状语从句+1个同位语从句+1个名词&动词过去式构成的复合形容词+1个现在分词作目的状语，be no+名词表决不，动词搭配又合理，可谓长句中的典范）
第6句为某E 同学Comment 中的一句长句，大家把它和第5句对照着看，对照着学
6．Even though Zhao has been handsomely compensated 650,000 yuan by government, which is expected to be more, this financial compensation still can not hold a candle to无法与„„相提并论 Zhao‟s 11 years‟ torturous and freedom-lost prison life, thus confirming the saying that, “Money is not everything” .（让步状从+非限制性定从+复合形容词+现在分词作结果状语+引用谚语）
7. Sunshangxiang stood out as a dazzling pearl from quantities of distinct historical figures, confirming the saying that, „Women are no inferior to men‟. （现在分词作结果状语与引用名言的完美结合，推荐）
内容技巧二：神出鬼没的插入语
为嘛要用插入语？短句中用插入语，可以充更多字数，中长句中间用插入语，让句式更整齐美观 来看一些典型的插入语
单词作插入语，如：besides, however, otherwise, therefore, though
1.On the other hand, however , computer is not without its defects/disadvantages. （however 作插入语，作无论如何/但是的意思，是最常用的一个插入语）
2. We should, therefore , take advantage of the fruits of computers and avoid the opposite facet 方面.
（therefore 作插入语，使用的频率也非常之高，同时，上句中用fruits 代替了advantages, 避免了前后重复并且相当之形象）
短语作插入语，如for example, by the way, in other words, so far, as a matter of fact, as a result等等
1. China and India, for example, are neighbours. 2. The United Nations are calling for more environment-friendly actions, in other words, they are demanding that people all over the world （should ）switch to green products and do their bit to protect the earth.
内容技巧三：适当用被动替换主动
适当用被动句，更能反映客观事实，如： 1. Attention should be paid to 替换 We should pay attention to
2. Immediate/Instant/Effective measures should/is needed to be taken/carried out to „„ 替换 We should take immediate measures to …… 3. Great/Joint effort should be made to …… 替换 We should make great/joint effort to „„ 4. It should be pointed out that/It should 替换never be neglected/overlooked/ignored that ……I must point out that ……/ We should never neglect/overlook/ignore that ……
5. We are brought up to believe that …… 替换 We firmly believe that „„
内容技巧四：关键词、高频词句的表达多样性
一遍新、两遍厌，好曲不能听三遍，同样地，再精彩的单词被你反复用来用去，语势就要弱很多。相反，若能在表达同一个意思时切换用不同的近义词，不但给人耳目一新之感，也大大增加文章整体的文采。但使用时也要注意，不要刻意追求难词深词高级词，要是写出来一篇作文通篇全是专六专八的单词，批卷老师查金山词霸都来不及还帮你批好分数？
下面来看对于表达同一个意思，有多少种不同的写法（最土的写法放最后的括号里）
1. 我（个人）认为：
For my part；
From my point of view/From my perspective；
Personally speaking；
Personally I maintain that ……;
I （firmly ） hold the view that……；
In my humble opinion ;
I‟m of the opinion that ……
（In my opinion & I think）
2. 大多数人认为、知道 Many, if not most/Most, if not all, harbor the idea that ……；The majority of the people/Many individuals take the attitude that ……；
It‟s universally/widely accepted/acknowledged that ……； It‟s shared by a large number of people that ……； There‟s no one but knows that ……
（Many people think that……）
3. „„越来越流行
to become increasingly popular;
…… gain growing popularity;
……is increasingly appealing to;
……is catching on a increasing/growing number of people （……is more and more popular）
4. 关注„„，重视„„
pour attention into …… ;
take …… into account;
take …… into consideration;
be concerned with/about;
keep oneself （well ）informed of;
become aware of/that ……；
（pay attention to/put emphasis on）
5. 据我所知，„„
to the best of my knowledge;
for all I know/ for what I can tell
（as far as I know）
6. 做„„是有好处的、有帮助的
It pays to ……;
It‟s rewarding to ……; It‟s of great benefit to ……;
One can reap huge fruits from ……
（it’s good/helpful to……）
7. „„导致了
give rise to;
……（greatly ）contribute to……；
…… is a major contributor to ……;
……lead to ……; ……result in ……
（„„cause „„）
8. 喜爱„„, 热衷于„„
take a fancy to /have a fancy for „„
have an affection for „„
have a love affair with
be fond of/be keen on/be keen about „„ be obsessed with „„
（like……）
9. 凡事都有两面性
No garden has no weeds
Everything has its pluses and minuses
Everything cuts both ways
…… is a double-edged sword
We should not be blind to the other side of …… （every coin has two sides ）
10. 努力做某事、尽某人之力做某事
do everything in one‟s power to ……
take pains to do
spare no effort/ make an effort to do
do one‟s utmost to ……
go all out to do ……
do one‟s bit to ……
（try one’s best to do）
11. „„ 不尽如人意
…… has/leaves a lot to be desired
…… fails to meet/satisfy one‟s need/demand/requirement
…… is far from satisfactory
…… doesn‟t come up to one‟s expectations
（„„is undesirable）
12. „„就是个极好的例子，„„恰好能说明我的观点
„„ is such a prime example
we can cite …… as an excellent example of
„„ perfectly fits/illustrates my idea/description of„„
„„ perfectly serve my purpose
（for example，……）
13. 在某种程度上
at some point
to some extent/degree; to a certain extent/degree
in a sort of way
in part
in a sense
（partly ）
14. „„ 无法与„„相提并论；„„与„„相差甚远
…… can‟t not even hold a candle to ……
…… pales into insignificance when compared with ……
…… is not in the same class with ……
…… can‟t rival …… in ……
there‟s no comparison between …… and ……
…… can never approach ……
三、结尾类：
结尾公式一：我们得出了这样的结论……
说要说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，领导长篇大论，到最后也得冒出个“总而言之”之类的话。也就是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子： 1. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw/come to/reach/arrive at the conclusion that …… （议论类文章的万金油式句型，非常正规、书面，不过略微缺乏新意） 2. Thus, it can be included that ……/ we can find that ……
3. Needless to say/Admittedly/Obviously, ……（如果读者很难“显而见之”，但说无妨，就当读者的眼光太浅罢了！） 4. The ample 充分的 evidence presented enables us to reasonably conc lude that ……（成熟老练，中规中矩）
5. Therefore, it‟s quite reasonable for me/us to assume that ……（总结完之后，来点美好的期盼，尽情地去YY ）
结尾公式二：我们提出了以下建议……
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了。换言之，这类结尾就是在高歌，明天会更好~
1. Therefore/Thus, it is high time that we did ……（提建议还用个虚拟！很拽很
高级！！！）
2. Accordingly , I recommend that ……（some measures should be taken ）（于是乎„„我建议„„）
3. Consequently, to solve the problem, I‟d like to give my advice/suggestion that ……（都已经想着如何帮人家解决困难了，多么实际一孩子„„）
写在后头：
这份作文素材整理，花费了咱大量时间和心血才完成> 目的无他，希望大家充分利用好里面漂亮的词句，将自己的作文修饰地更加精美。限于时间原因和本人能力有限，有些部分可能整理得并不十分充
分，就当是抛砖引玉，为大家提供一个参考的框架吧~ 期末考试就要来咯，谨以此与诸位共勉！