【第一段】
简要描述图片，略微引向主题；
图片基调描述： 相关细节描写： 标题引向主题：
Information transformation
Regardless of … Prefer A to B A is preferable to B. A outweigh B
1. 举例证明 2. 因果分析 3. 利弊分析 4. 名言哲理 5. 正反论证
【第二段】
点明图片寓意，进行充分拓展；
T →D1→D2→C
a.
化立论为驳论 大众观点 质疑大众 详实论据 1. 社会弊病（环境生态）控制：外控，内控
得出结论
b. 化苍白为哲理
格言哲理 哲理阐释 详实论据 得出结论
c.
化平淡为修辞
灵活提出论点； 灵活运用修辞。
【第三段】
针对上文论调，进行有效评论。
Corresponding should be laid out to …… (school regulations)
Official intervention should be cast on this matter ….
Fines and penalties should be activated to direct this situation to a positive one.
Media supervision should be put on this matter to reduce its prevalence….
self-control
…...
The awareness of ……should be nurtured among those who ….
Right attitude towards …should be advocated among those who ….
How to put the problem of … under control? It occurs to the vast majority that a package deal, involving …, …, and …, is demanded by the current situation. That is a way, but not comprehensive enough. Actually we also need to …., with the assistance of which we can fundamentally put this trend to an end.
Such misconducts should be put under control immediately! But how? Suggestions from the general public may involve …, …, and …. These suggestions have been put into practice for years, with fruitful rewards. Is that enough? Actually what we need is more than what mentioned above, but a new way that ……
2. 社会风尚
表明支持 说明价值
（惠及自身与他人） （惠及当下与未来）
积极参与
Asked about my attitude to …, I am to say …is either beneficial to individuals or elevating to society. Actually this escalating effect will not last for merely several years. As it is a wealth, we are willing to deliver it from one individual to another, from one decade to another, and from one generation to another. college students, we have the duty to join the campaign of …... )
I did not do it for you.
《狗镇》舞台剧
3. 个人方案
外在帮助：咨询，阅览，影视 内在自助：详细计划
How to step out of the shadow of …? Once upon a time, I was suggested by friends to seek help from seniors, experts, or books when I was in the same trouble. That was a way, but a passive way. Help from them is not always available, and not necessarily suits me. Therefore in face of the …situation, I am determined to …, to …, and to …. 书信 摘要 备忘录
1. 格式
2. 素材
Jan. 19th
Dear XXX,
Dear sir or madam, To whom it may concern,
【第一段】
道明来意；
自我介绍，问候致意，说明背景
【第二段】 T →D1(C1)→D2(C2)
A ：罗列：建议、请求、理由、困难 B ：情节：conflict
【第三段】
重申来意； 适度拓展。
Y ours sincerely,
Li Ming
X city was hit by a flood …
Dear friends,
I am writing, on behalf of the student union, to ask for help for citizens in a disaster. Several (A couple of days ago, a flood and storm turned thousands of residents in X city into homeless individuals.)
Their daily necessities, including foodstuff, fresh water and medicine, are far from adequacy, while local authorities cannot afford to address their many needs. In addition, these thousands of friend need intensive care day and night, as only under such care can they recover from panic?
Knowing their difficulties how can we continue to stand with arm folded? Anyone who is to show support can contact us at [email protected].
School authorities
Exercise 1
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) interpret the phenomenon it reflects, and then
3) give your comments.
Y ou should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)
学生的对联
图片基调描述：ironic 相关细节描写：
Couplet, the first line, the second line, Horizontal scroll
标题引向主题：dishonest
Depicted by the cartoon is an ironic scene that the couplet pasted by students mirrors unfavorable attitude toward college examinations. The first line reads “there will be no upgrade without cheating in exams”, while the second line bears “success in tests outweighs dignity”. The pass exams by any means.
大众观点 诚信 质疑大众 反问 详实论据 单从考试方面：
小抄，耳语，手势，短信， 得出结论 不再诚信，自身，教育
It is generally accepted that ….. It is conventionally hold that …..
It is shared by the general public that ...
It is deeply rooted in the mind of the public that …
It is widely shared that no any other groups in this world can be as honest as college students. But is that a truth any longer? Examples against this public view are abundant and within easy reach. From college examinations alone, it is not surprising to see candidates delivering keys by gesture, by whisper, or even by mobile phones. Evidently, students in mounting numbers don ’t cherish the virtue of honesty anymore, which may exert negative influence on either their overall development or the quality of education, not to mention the prospect of our society.
negative influence on …
Exercise 2
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your comments.
Y
ou should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)
The dream of a Bird
Alarming
A bird is holding a gun. He is hiding in the bush. He is staring at the sky Human beings are soaring
He wants to shoot people for revenge
What people did with him
is staring at the sky where human beings are soaring. Clearly, he is longing for a day when becomes a hunter, shooting people for revenge. His dream is sparked by what people once did with him.
大众观点 走进环保时代 质疑大众 反问
详实论据 个人：狩猎| 企业：排污 得出结论 未普及 有害
It has become a “common sense ” that no any other ages places such an emphasis on environmental protection as today. But does everybody or every group take part in this campaign? The answer is rather disappointing! The following misdeeds or misconducts are faimiliar. It is not atmosphere polluted. Evidently, the sense of achieving a better environment is not so pervasive as we expect, which may be detrimental to our security and well being.
创作：
The nature treats us the way we treat it.
What we do with the nature is to be answered for.
格言哲理
As a famous thinker once put it, “……” Never easily let go of the truth, “……” Never easily shrug off the truth, “……” Never easily wave aside the motto, “….. ”
The extended meaning of the cartoon can be summarized as a motto: …… 哲理阐释
That is, ……
Put it another way, …… Simply state it, ……. In other words, …….
详实论据 过去：现在： 得出结论
Exhibited by this cartoon is a motto: it is our obligation to take care of our nature. However, such a motto has been waved aside by a significan number of us. Any cases? Haven ’t you evern seen some of us shooting wild life for fun, for food, or for profit? Haven’t you ever noticed some factories overmining ? Where has their concience gone? Where has sense of social responsibility gone? Where has insight to the future gone? Aren't these virtues
swallowed by their greediness, ?
seeking instant satisfaction at the cost of long-term benefit?
Sacrifice …for …. At the cost of …. At the expense of …. Geographic disaster Occur Recuring
Be harmful to… Be detrimental to …
Pervasive
The implication of the cartoon can be summarized as a philosophic topic in daily life: the nature treats us the way we treat it. Put it another way, the nature may reward us fruitfuly on condition that we are on good term with it, while punish us if we mistreat it. In the past, ancestors never went too far in exploiting natural resources, so the gifts from nature were available anywhere and anytime. Currently, our greediness has threatened these resources, the edge of running out. No wonder the bird in the picture revenges on human. He is warning us that what we did with the nature is to be answered for.
【版本三】
Get on well with Be on good term with
Exercise 3
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3)
give your comments.
图片基调：instructive 相关细节：
A man, facing several directions, is walking back and forth, wondering where to go and feeling perplexed and nervous. 标题总结：decisive
that a man, facing several directions, is walking back and forth, wondering where to go and feeling perplexed and nervous. The caption
Inform sb., as well as …., that ..
Have you ever been trapped into a dilemma, or delicate situation? If so, you may feel the same awkwardness and confusion as the man does in the picture. He, facing several directions, is walking back and forth, wondering where to go and feeling perplexed and nervous. Clearly, the cartoonist seeks to inform us that decisiveness is a quality necessary for anyone.
Better trying than crying.
trying than crying. Put it another way , facing choices, we may fail to grasp opportunities if we may escape our attention.) Spcifically, hesitating may grind off our passion and judgement. On the contrary , decisiveness and braveness may earn us chances to step out of shadow. The sad guy in the picture is informing us, through his lessons, that the latter is the best choice.
Earn sb. sth. .
Exercise 4
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your comments.
Under the ridiculous appearance of the cartoon lies a social crisis, which almost has negative influence on all steps of life. In the drawing, a doctor, sitting in front of a patient, is explaining, “out of the consideration of your health, I rendered you an overall medical treatment.” Actually, he is excusing himself for his over-service, just as what happened in other businesses.
Excuse oneself for ….
For any business or social agency, to take good care of consumers is to care himself.
To live is to learn.
格言哲理
哲理阐释 正话反说 详实论据 银行 得出结论
As an esteemed banker once put it, “For any business or social agency, to take good care of consumers is to care himself.” In other words, it is impossible for any firm to flourish which pays no attention to the benefits of customers. However, a significant number of agencies, like the doctor in the picture, ignore the truth. Let us take some banks for example. During the course of transaction, elder people are often persuaded into buying substandard money-management services, resulting to financial loss. Evidently, such businesses, if they continue these misconducts, may be abandoned by the general public.
Deserted Abandoned
Persuade into doing ….
Exercise 5
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your comments.
Mr. “Help-Provider ”
Mr. “Help-Accepter ”
Have you ever been assisted by any others? If so, you may feel the same warmth and excitement as help-accepter does in the picture. A Mr. “Help-Provider ” is generously offering what he could, in his mind what he should. Meanwhile, a Mr. “Help-Accepter ” is extending his gratitude heart and soul. Clearly, the cartoonist seeks to inform us that mutual assistance is the right access towards harmony.
Isn ’t it a motto exhibited by this cartoo: it is our obligation to offer help generously? However, such a motto has escaped the attention of a significan number of us. Any cases? Haven’t you evern seen some folks seating still even if a pregnant lady standing before them ? Haven ’t you ever noticed some guys standing with arm folded even though the wounded groaning in a car accident? Where has their concience gone? Where has unselfishness gone? Where has generousness gone? Aren't these virtues swallowed by their cowardliness , fearing that they may be involved into ?
cowardliness
Folks Guys
Person Individual People Man Buddy
【第一段】
简要描述图片，略微引向主题；
图片基调描述： 相关细节描写： 标题引向主题：
Information transformation
Regardless of … Prefer A to B A is preferable to B. A outweigh B
1. 举例证明 2. 因果分析 3. 利弊分析 4. 名言哲理 5. 正反论证
【第二段】
点明图片寓意，进行充分拓展；
T →D1→D2→C
a.
化立论为驳论 大众观点 质疑大众 详实论据 1. 社会弊病（环境生态）控制：外控，内控
得出结论
b. 化苍白为哲理
格言哲理 哲理阐释 详实论据 得出结论
c.
化平淡为修辞
灵活提出论点； 灵活运用修辞。
【第三段】
针对上文论调，进行有效评论。
Corresponding should be laid out to …… (school regulations)
Official intervention should be cast on this matter ….
Fines and penalties should be activated to direct this situation to a positive one.
Media supervision should be put on this matter to reduce its prevalence….
self-control
…...
The awareness of ……should be nurtured among those who ….
Right attitude towards …should be advocated among those who ….
How to put the problem of … under control? It occurs to the vast majority that a package deal, involving …, …, and …, is demanded by the current situation. That is a way, but not comprehensive enough. Actually we also need to …., with the assistance of which we can fundamentally put this trend to an end.
Such misconducts should be put under control immediately! But how? Suggestions from the general public may involve …, …, and …. These suggestions have been put into practice for years, with fruitful rewards. Is that enough? Actually what we need is more than what mentioned above, but a new way that ……
2. 社会风尚
表明支持 说明价值
（惠及自身与他人） （惠及当下与未来）
积极参与
Asked about my attitude to …, I am to say …is either beneficial to individuals or elevating to society. Actually this escalating effect will not last for merely several years. As it is a wealth, we are willing to deliver it from one individual to another, from one decade to another, and from one generation to another. college students, we have the duty to join the campaign of …... )
I did not do it for you.
《狗镇》舞台剧
3. 个人方案
外在帮助：咨询，阅览，影视 内在自助：详细计划
How to step out of the shadow of …? Once upon a time, I was suggested by friends to seek help from seniors, experts, or books when I was in the same trouble. That was a way, but a passive way. Help from them is not always available, and not necessarily suits me. Therefore in face of the …situation, I am determined to …, to …, and to …. 书信 摘要 备忘录
1. 格式
2. 素材
Jan. 19th
Dear XXX,
Dear sir or madam, To whom it may concern,
【第一段】
道明来意；
自我介绍，问候致意，说明背景
【第二段】 T →D1(C1)→D2(C2)
A ：罗列：建议、请求、理由、困难 B ：情节：conflict
【第三段】
重申来意； 适度拓展。
Y ours sincerely,
Li Ming
X city was hit by a flood …
Dear friends,
I am writing, on behalf of the student union, to ask for help for citizens in a disaster. Several (A couple of days ago, a flood and storm turned thousands of residents in X city into homeless individuals.)
Their daily necessities, including foodstuff, fresh water and medicine, are far from adequacy, while local authorities cannot afford to address their many needs. In addition, these thousands of friend need intensive care day and night, as only under such care can they recover from panic?
Knowing their difficulties how can we continue to stand with arm folded? Anyone who is to show support can contact us at [email protected].
School authorities
Exercise 1
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) interpret the phenomenon it reflects, and then
3) give your comments.
Y ou should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)
学生的对联
图片基调描述：ironic 相关细节描写：
Couplet, the first line, the second line, Horizontal scroll
标题引向主题：dishonest
Depicted by the cartoon is an ironic scene that the couplet pasted by students mirrors unfavorable attitude toward college examinations. The first line reads “there will be no upgrade without cheating in exams”, while the second line bears “success in tests outweighs dignity”. The pass exams by any means.
大众观点 诚信 质疑大众 反问 详实论据 单从考试方面：
小抄，耳语，手势，短信， 得出结论 不再诚信，自身，教育
It is generally accepted that ….. It is conventionally hold that …..
It is shared by the general public that ...
It is deeply rooted in the mind of the public that …
It is widely shared that no any other groups in this world can be as honest as college students. But is that a truth any longer? Examples against this public view are abundant and within easy reach. From college examinations alone, it is not surprising to see candidates delivering keys by gesture, by whisper, or even by mobile phones. Evidently, students in mounting numbers don ’t cherish the virtue of honesty anymore, which may exert negative influence on either their overall development or the quality of education, not to mention the prospect of our society.
negative influence on …
Exercise 2
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your comments.
Y
ou should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)
The dream of a Bird
Alarming
A bird is holding a gun. He is hiding in the bush. He is staring at the sky Human beings are soaring
He wants to shoot people for revenge
What people did with him
is staring at the sky where human beings are soaring. Clearly, he is longing for a day when becomes a hunter, shooting people for revenge. His dream is sparked by what people once did with him.
大众观点 走进环保时代 质疑大众 反问
详实论据 个人：狩猎| 企业：排污 得出结论 未普及 有害
It has become a “common sense ” that no any other ages places such an emphasis on environmental protection as today. But does everybody or every group take part in this campaign? The answer is rather disappointing! The following misdeeds or misconducts are faimiliar. It is not atmosphere polluted. Evidently, the sense of achieving a better environment is not so pervasive as we expect, which may be detrimental to our security and well being.
创作：
The nature treats us the way we treat it.
What we do with the nature is to be answered for.
格言哲理
As a famous thinker once put it, “……” Never easily let go of the truth, “……” Never easily shrug off the truth, “……” Never easily wave aside the motto, “….. ”
The extended meaning of the cartoon can be summarized as a motto: …… 哲理阐释
That is, ……
Put it another way, …… Simply state it, ……. In other words, …….
详实论据 过去：现在： 得出结论
Exhibited by this cartoon is a motto: it is our obligation to take care of our nature. However, such a motto has been waved aside by a significan number of us. Any cases? Haven ’t you evern seen some of us shooting wild life for fun, for food, or for profit? Haven’t you ever noticed some factories overmining ? Where has their concience gone? Where has sense of social responsibility gone? Where has insight to the future gone? Aren't these virtues
swallowed by their greediness, ?
seeking instant satisfaction at the cost of long-term benefit?
Sacrifice …for …. At the cost of …. At the expense of …. Geographic disaster Occur Recuring
Be harmful to… Be detrimental to …
Pervasive
The implication of the cartoon can be summarized as a philosophic topic in daily life: the nature treats us the way we treat it. Put it another way, the nature may reward us fruitfuly on condition that we are on good term with it, while punish us if we mistreat it. In the past, ancestors never went too far in exploiting natural resources, so the gifts from nature were available anywhere and anytime. Currently, our greediness has threatened these resources, the edge of running out. No wonder the bird in the picture revenges on human. He is warning us that what we did with the nature is to be answered for.
【版本三】
Get on well with Be on good term with
Exercise 3
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3)
give your comments.
图片基调：instructive 相关细节：
A man, facing several directions, is walking back and forth, wondering where to go and feeling perplexed and nervous. 标题总结：decisive
that a man, facing several directions, is walking back and forth, wondering where to go and feeling perplexed and nervous. The caption
Inform sb., as well as …., that ..
Have you ever been trapped into a dilemma, or delicate situation? If so, you may feel the same awkwardness and confusion as the man does in the picture. He, facing several directions, is walking back and forth, wondering where to go and feeling perplexed and nervous. Clearly, the cartoonist seeks to inform us that decisiveness is a quality necessary for anyone.
Better trying than crying.
trying than crying. Put it another way , facing choices, we may fail to grasp opportunities if we may escape our attention.) Spcifically, hesitating may grind off our passion and judgement. On the contrary , decisiveness and braveness may earn us chances to step out of shadow. The sad guy in the picture is informing us, through his lessons, that the latter is the best choice.
Earn sb. sth. .
Exercise 4
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your comments.
Under the ridiculous appearance of the cartoon lies a social crisis, which almost has negative influence on all steps of life. In the drawing, a doctor, sitting in front of a patient, is explaining, “out of the consideration of your health, I rendered you an overall medical treatment.” Actually, he is excusing himself for his over-service, just as what happened in other businesses.
Excuse oneself for ….
For any business or social agency, to take good care of consumers is to care himself.
To live is to learn.
格言哲理
哲理阐释 正话反说 详实论据 银行 得出结论
As an esteemed banker once put it, “For any business or social agency, to take good care of consumers is to care himself.” In other words, it is impossible for any firm to flourish which pays no attention to the benefits of customers. However, a significant number of agencies, like the doctor in the picture, ignore the truth. Let us take some banks for example. During the course of transaction, elder people are often persuaded into buying substandard money-management services, resulting to financial loss. Evidently, such businesses, if they continue these misconducts, may be abandoned by the general public.
Deserted Abandoned
Persuade into doing ….
Exercise 5
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your comments.
Mr. “Help-Provider ”
Mr. “Help-Accepter ”
Have you ever been assisted by any others? If so, you may feel the same warmth and excitement as help-accepter does in the picture. A Mr. “Help-Provider ” is generously offering what he could, in his mind what he should. Meanwhile, a Mr. “Help-Accepter ” is extending his gratitude heart and soul. Clearly, the cartoonist seeks to inform us that mutual assistance is the right access towards harmony.
Isn ’t it a motto exhibited by this cartoo: it is our obligation to offer help generously? However, such a motto has escaped the attention of a significan number of us. Any cases? Haven’t you evern seen some folks seating still even if a pregnant lady standing before them ? Haven ’t you ever noticed some guys standing with arm folded even though the wounded groaning in a car accident? Where has their concience gone? Where has unselfishness gone? Where has generousness gone? Aren't these virtues swallowed by their cowardliness , fearing that they may be involved into ?
cowardliness
Folks Guys
Person Individual People Man Buddy