衡水万卷小专题三 短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断；如无错误，在该行右边横线上面一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误) ，则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 注意：原行没有错的不要改。
My classmate Liu Hong is a warm-hearted girl. She is good at studying, singing, dancing and playing piano.After hear Sichuan earthquake, she felt very sad about it.
She decided to do something to helping Sichuan people. First she calls her friends up and came up with having a benefit show. Then she handed out advertisement with her friends or put up signs asking people to watch. Luckily she did very well. A lot of people moved
and gave their hands to the Sichuan people.At last,she raised5,000yuan.She gave up all the money to the quake-hit areas.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误. 对标有题号的每行作出判断；如无错误，在该行右边横线上面一个勾；如有错误(每行只有一个错误) ，则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉. 该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词. 该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词. 注意：原行没有错的不要改.
I passed all the other course that I took at my university, but I could never pass botany. This was why all botany students had to spend several hours a week in a lab look through a microscope at plant cells, and I could never see through a microscope. This was used to make my professor angry. “I can’t see everything, ” I said. Then
he began patient enough to explain how to see through it, but I still couldn’t make it. At last we tried it with every adjustment of the microscope known to man. With my pleasure, I saw something a nd drew it quickly on the paper. “What’s that?” my professor asked. “That’s what I saw.” I answered. “No, you don’t!” he shouted, and he bent over and looking into the microscope. “That’s your eyes! You’ve fixed the lens so that it reflects! You’ve drawn your eyes!”
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误. 对标有题号的每行作出判断；如无错误，在该行右边横线上面一个勾；如有错误(每行只有一个错误) ，则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉. 该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词. 该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词. 注意：原行没有错的不要改.
I was anxiously expected your letter, and at last it has been reached me. I am very glad to know that everyone at home is enjoying good health as usually. Things here are the same now as we were before. The final examination will take place of next week. But I am now busy preparing my lessons. It’s nice to think that the summer vacation is coming near. I can’t say much I want to see you all again.
Looking forward to spend summer days with you. Give my love to Father, mother and anyone at home. 31.
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加. 删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
When Joe left university，he got a good job in a bike’s factory.And after he had worked there for some years，he decided to have a change.So he put a notice several newspapers，says what experience he had and the kind of job he would like to have.One of the answer he received was from a man who was looking for a job either.This man wrote to him，“Dear sir，when you get a new job ，to be kind enough to give your name and address to your present boss as I have been trying to find a position like yours for a long time.”After he had finished reading the letter，he suddenly realizes what he had done was real foolish.
32. 注意：将答案写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。
假定英主事课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请您修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语文错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加. 删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜钱（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只充许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With
little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon. I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加. 删除或修改。
增加：把缺词处叫个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 Dear Diary,
Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained, “He was lucky to find other one.” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world. To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I will never fall sleep.
Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.
Yours, Rosemary
34.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的工方增加. 删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意： 1. 每句不超过两个错误； 2. 每处错误及其修改均只限一词；
3. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher's office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn't cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me?
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此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每行作出判断；如无错误，在该行右边横线上面一个勾( ) ；如有错误(每行只有一个错误) ，则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Balloons have used for sports for about one hundred years. There are two kinds sport balloons, gas and hot air.Hot air balloons are preferred by balloonists because of their safe. They are also cheaper but easier to manage than gas balloons. Sport balloon flights are best early in the morning or late
in the afternoon when a wind is light, and pilots must watch the weather more carefully.Over the years, balloonists have tried again and again to cross the Atlantic Ocean.It was until
1979 that three American balloonists succeed.It took them just six days to make the trip away from the States to Paris, France.
专题三 短文改错答案
1. √
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6. advertisement→advertisements 7. or→and 8.moved 前加were 9. 去掉the 10. up→away
11. course→courses 12. why→because 13. look→looking 14. 去掉was
15. everything→anything 16. patient→patiently 17. √ 18. With→To 19. don't→didn’t 20. looking→looked
21. expected→ expecting 22. 去掉been 23. usually → usual 24. we → they 25. 去掉of
26. But → So/ And 27. √
28.much 前加how 29. spend → spending 30. anyone → everyone 31. 改错
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Dear Diary,
Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why
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34.
1. find sth. adj. 发现某物具备某种性质或特点，故“difficulty ”改为“difficult ” 2. hardly 意为“几乎不”，而“hard ”本身就有副词的性质，故“hardly ”改为“hard” 3. 第三句话中没有谓语动词，故“asking ”改为“asked ” 4. let ’sb. do sth. 故“to copy”改为“copy ”
5. after 为介词，后面应接动词的动名词形式作宾语，故“think ”改为“thinking ” 6. Mary 和我是两个人，表示两者都应该用both ，故“all ”改为“both ”
7. same 在使用时通常和定冠词the 搭配，如the same as, I’m in the same class with you. 故“same ”改为“the same”
8. 他们只参加了一次考试，test 应用单数形式，故“tests ”改为“test ”
9. 此句意为“我们被警告不能再次作弊，否则她将通知我们的家长”，故“so ”改为“or ” 10. 文章描述的是过去发生的一件事，全文时态均为一般过去时，故“does ”改为“did ” 35.
1. 在used 前加been 这里显然应该用被动语态。
2. 在kinds 后加of 用a kind of表示“一种”，记住介词不可缺。 3. safe→safety用名词而不是形容词作介词宾语。 4. but→and这里表示的是顺接关系：又便宜，又好用。 5. √
6. a→the表示大自然的变化，如风. 雨. 雪，通常要加定冠词。 7. 去掉more 这里没有比较的对象与范围, 因此用原级。 8. 在was 后加not 这里用not until表示“直到……才”。
9. succeed→succeeded这里表示的是过去的动作，因此用一般过去时。 10. 去掉away 这里是from...to 结构和make a trip表示“旅行”，away 是多余的。
衡水万卷小专题三 短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断；如无错误，在该行右边横线上面一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误) ，则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 注意：原行没有错的不要改。
My classmate Liu Hong is a warm-hearted girl. She is good at studying, singing, dancing and playing piano.After hear Sichuan earthquake, she felt very sad about it.
She decided to do something to helping Sichuan people. First she calls her friends up and came up with having a benefit show. Then she handed out advertisement with her friends or put up signs asking people to watch. Luckily she did very well. A lot of people moved
and gave their hands to the Sichuan people.At last,she raised5,000yuan.She gave up all the money to the quake-hit areas.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误. 对标有题号的每行作出判断；如无错误，在该行右边横线上面一个勾；如有错误(每行只有一个错误) ，则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉. 该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词. 该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词. 注意：原行没有错的不要改.
I passed all the other course that I took at my university, but I could never pass botany. This was why all botany students had to spend several hours a week in a lab look through a microscope at plant cells, and I could never see through a microscope. This was used to make my professor angry. “I can’t see everything, ” I said. Then
he began patient enough to explain how to see through it, but I still couldn’t make it. At last we tried it with every adjustment of the microscope known to man. With my pleasure, I saw something a nd drew it quickly on the paper. “What’s that?” my professor asked. “That’s what I saw.” I answered. “No, you don’t!” he shouted, and he bent over and looking into the microscope. “That’s your eyes! You’ve fixed the lens so that it reflects! You’ve drawn your eyes!”
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误. 对标有题号的每行作出判断；如无错误，在该行右边横线上面一个勾；如有错误(每行只有一个错误) ，则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉. 该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词. 该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词. 注意：原行没有错的不要改.
I was anxiously expected your letter, and at last it has been reached me. I am very glad to know that everyone at home is enjoying good health as usually. Things here are the same now as we were before. The final examination will take place of next week. But I am now busy preparing my lessons. It’s nice to think that the summer vacation is coming near. I can’t say much I want to see you all again.
Looking forward to spend summer days with you. Give my love to Father, mother and anyone at home. 31.
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加. 删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
When Joe left university，he got a good job in a bike’s factory.And after he had worked there for some years，he decided to have a change.So he put a notice several newspapers，says what experience he had and the kind of job he would like to have.One of the answer he received was from a man who was looking for a job either.This man wrote to him，“Dear sir，when you get a new job ，to be kind enough to give your name and address to your present boss as I have been trying to find a position like yours for a long time.”After he had finished reading the letter，he suddenly realizes what he had done was real foolish.
32. 注意：将答案写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。
假定英主事课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请您修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语文错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加. 删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜钱（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只充许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With
little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon. I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.
33.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加. 删除或修改。
增加：把缺词处叫个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 Dear Diary,
Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained, “He was lucky to find other one.” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world. To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I will never fall sleep.
Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.
Yours, Rosemary
34.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的工方增加. 删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意： 1. 每句不超过两个错误； 2. 每处错误及其修改均只限一词；
3. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher's office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn't cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me?
35.
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每行作出判断；如无错误，在该行右边横线上面一个勾( ) ；如有错误(每行只有一个错误) ，则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Balloons have used for sports for about one hundred years. There are two kinds sport balloons, gas and hot air.Hot air balloons are preferred by balloonists because of their safe. They are also cheaper but easier to manage than gas balloons. Sport balloon flights are best early in the morning or late
in the afternoon when a wind is light, and pilots must watch the weather more carefully.Over the years, balloonists have tried again and again to cross the Atlantic Ocean.It was until
1979 that three American balloonists succeed.It took them just six days to make the trip away from the States to Paris, France.
专题三 短文改错答案
1. √
2.piano 前加the 3. hear→hearing 4. helping→help 5. calls→called
6. advertisement→advertisements 7. or→and 8.moved 前加were 9. 去掉the 10. up→away
11. course→courses 12. why→because 13. look→looking 14. 去掉was
15. everything→anything 16. patient→patiently 17. √ 18. With→To 19. don't→didn’t 20. looking→looked
21. expected→ expecting 22. 去掉been 23. usually → usual 24. we → they 25. 去掉of
26. But → So/ And 27. √
28.much 前加how 29. spend → spending 30. anyone → everyone 31. 改错
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Dear Diary,
Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why
last week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained, “He was lucky to find one.” His
moved another in the
classmates and
world. To make matters now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow
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friend.
are
Yours, Rosemary
34.
1. find sth. adj. 发现某物具备某种性质或特点，故“difficulty ”改为“difficult ” 2. hardly 意为“几乎不”，而“hard ”本身就有副词的性质，故“hardly ”改为“hard” 3. 第三句话中没有谓语动词，故“asking ”改为“asked ” 4. let ’sb. do sth. 故“to copy”改为“copy ”
5. after 为介词，后面应接动词的动名词形式作宾语，故“think ”改为“thinking ” 6. Mary 和我是两个人，表示两者都应该用both ，故“all ”改为“both ”
7. same 在使用时通常和定冠词the 搭配，如the same as, I’m in the same class with you. 故“same ”改为“the same”
8. 他们只参加了一次考试，test 应用单数形式，故“tests ”改为“test ”
9. 此句意为“我们被警告不能再次作弊，否则她将通知我们的家长”，故“so ”改为“or ” 10. 文章描述的是过去发生的一件事，全文时态均为一般过去时，故“does ”改为“did ” 35.
1. 在used 前加been 这里显然应该用被动语态。
2. 在kinds 后加of 用a kind of表示“一种”，记住介词不可缺。 3. safe→safety用名词而不是形容词作介词宾语。 4. but→and这里表示的是顺接关系：又便宜，又好用。 5. √
6. a→the表示大自然的变化，如风. 雨. 雪，通常要加定冠词。 7. 去掉more 这里没有比较的对象与范围, 因此用原级。 8. 在was 后加not 这里用not until表示“直到……才”。
9. succeed→succeeded这里表示的是过去的动作，因此用一般过去时。 10. 去掉away 这里是from...to 结构和make a trip表示“旅行”，away 是多余的。