2016年高考模拟试卷英语卷
考试时间120分钟满分120分
第I卷
第一部分：英语知识运用（共两节，满分30分）
第一节：单项填空（共20小题；每小题0. 5分，满分10分）
从A、B、C和D四个选项中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题纸上将该选项标号涂黑。
1. --- Delicious food and professional service!
--- _____________!(原创)
A. All right. B. With pleasure
C. It couldn’t be better D. Nice having you
2. Nowadays, ______ new policy that the government asks its people to delay retirement is becoming ______ hot issue. (原创)
A. a, the B. the, the C. the, a D. a, a
3. She survived the fire, but unfortunately her house was damaged ______ repair.
(原创)
A. beyond B. over C. under D. against
4. I found it a shock that he ______ be such a rude man. (原创)
A. would B. should C. must D. could
5. ______ will be given to those who acquire experience and skills. (原创)
A. prediction B. preparation C. preference D. Presence
6. It was the news ______ he was awarded an iphone 6 for his succeeding in the competition ______ let him lie awake for a whole night. (原创)
A. which, which B. which, that C. that, that D. that, which
7. It _______ that he had been telling lies. (原创)
A. come out B. come up C. come along D. come about
8. He will not attend the meeting next month, because he ______
himself in Los Angeles then. （改编自五三）
A. is enjoying B. will be enjoying C. enjoys D. enjoyed
9. Without good instructions of the coach, one will probably ______ a lot of bad
habits while you are exercising in gyms. (改编自全品)
A. take up B. bring up C. pick up D. put up
10.--- What’s your plan for the weekend?
--- ______ a composition, I am going to finish my math homework.(改编自高
考零距离突破)
A. In addition B. Apart from C. Instead of D. Thanks to
11.We need a capable leader, ______ with straightforward personality and good
humour.(改编自全品)
A. one B. the one C. who D. that
12.______ has been announced that we will have another exam next week.(原创)
A. Which B. That C. As D. It
13.Do you think the robot will ______ take the place of human beings?
A. especially B. merely C. frequently D. finally
14.--- can you lend me the book Jane Eyre?
--- sorry, I returned it to the library just now. maybe it is still ______.
A. available B. affordable C. acceptable D. valuable
15.It is necessary and important that the websites check their cooperator’s
______ to protect their rights. (改编自高考零距离)
A． purpose B. relationship C. administration D. reliability
16.--- If the traffic ______ not so bad, I ______ here on time.(原创)
--- What a pity! Your just missed the most fantastic scene.
A. were, could be B. was, could have been
C. had been, could have been D. were, could have been
th 17.The voyage of travellers before the 17 century show that they were not ______
the sea even though they didn’t have modern navigational aids.
A. at the expense of B. at the risk of
C. in the way of D. at the mercy of
18.______ your watch five minutes ahead is an effective way to avoid being late.
A. Setting B. Being set C. Having set D. set
19.The patient was very impolite to the doctor, ______ made the doctor more angry.
A. who B. what C. which D. whom
20.--- You are confident about the job interview, aren’t you?
---______. I’m well prepared and feel I’ve got everything they need.
A. Sure, I am B. It’s hard to say
C. Well, maybe D. I hope so
第二节：完形填空（共20小题，每小题1分，满分20分）（原创）
阅读下面短文，掌握其大意，然后从 21～40 各题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中，选出最佳选项，并在答题纸上将该选项标号涂黑。
Once upon a time, there lived a big mango tree. A little boy loved to come and play around it everyday. Time went by, the little boy grew, and he no longer 21 around the tree. One day, the boy __22__ to the tree with a sad look on his face. “Come and play with me,” the tree asked. “I am __23__ a kid, I don’t play around trees anymore.” The boy replied, “I want toys. I need __24__ to buy them.” “Sorry, I don’t have money„ but you can __25__ all my mangoes and sell them so you will have money.” The boy picked all the mangoes on the tree and left happily. The boy didn’t come back. The tree was sad. One day, the boy __26__ a man returned. The tree was so __27 _. “Come and play with me,” the tree said. “I don’t have time to play. I have to work for my family. We need a __28 _ for shelter. Can you help me?” “Sorry, I don’t have a house, but you can cut my branches to __29 _ your house.” The man did so and left happily. The tree was glad to see him happy but the boy didn’t come back afterward. The tree was again lonely and sad.
One hot summer day, the man __30 _ and the tree was delighted. “Come and play with me!” The tree said. “I am getting __31 _. I want to go sailing to __32 _ myself. Can you give me a boat?” “Use my trunk to build your boat. You can sail far away and be happy.” So the man cut the tree trunk to make a boat. He went __33 _ and didn’t come back for a long time.
Finally, the man returned many years later. “Sorry, my boy, __34_ I don’t have anything for you anymore. No more mangoes to give you.” The tree said. “I don’t have teeth to bite,” the man replied. “No more trunk for you to __35 _.” “I am too old for that now,” the man said.
“I really can’t give you__36 , the only thing left is my dying__37 _,” the tree said with sadness. “I don’t need much now, just a place to__38 _. I am tired after all these years,” the man replied. “Good! Old tree roots are the best place to __39 _ and rest. Come sit down with me and rest.” The boy sat down and the tree was __40_ and smiled.
21. A. climbed B. ate C. sat D. played
22. A. came up B. came along C. came back D. came out
23. A. always B. no longer C. would rather D. used to
24. A. mangoes B. trees C. time D. money
25. A. pick B. buy C. eat D. go
26. A. brought into B. taken into C. grown into D. knocked into
27. A. sad B. interested C. worried D. excited
28. A. a house B. a tree C. a rest D. a family
29. A. decorate B. paint C. build D. plant
30. A. went B. left C. returned D. replied
31. A. old B. young C. fat D. strong
32. A. educate B. relax C. paid D. help
33. A. sailing B. fishing C. hiking D. exercising
34. A. meanwhile B. but C. though D. however
35. A. climb on B. stand by C. talk about D. eat up
36. A. something B. everything C. anything D. nothing
37. A. roots B. leaves C. body D. trunk
38. A. live B. rest C. stay D. go
39. A. rely on B. focus on C. lean on D. fix on
40. A. glad B. sad C. tired D. anxious
第二部分：阅读理解（第一节20小题，第二节5小题；每小题2分，满分50分）（原创）
第一节：阅读下列材料，从每题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中，选出最佳选项，并在答题纸上将该选项标号涂黑。
A
2015 Was a Warm, Wild Year. What’s Next?
2015 saw things heat up and get out of hand, and not just in politics.
A record warm December raised average temperatures enough to make 2015 the second hottest year on record in the United States, according to the National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration's National Climate Monitoring Annual Report,
which was released Thursday.
The United Nations had previously reported that 2015 was shaping up to be the warmest year on record for the whole planet.
Last year was also the third wettest on record in the U.S. and saw ten weather- or climate-related disasters that each caused at least $1 billion in damage in the U.S. and killed a total of 155 people. These include a drought, two floods, five severe storms, a wildfire, and a winter storm.
The average U.S. temperature was 54.4°F, 2.4°F above the 20th century average, and second only to 2012's record warmth. This was also the 19th year with average temperatures above the average for the century.
Every state reported above-average annual temperatures. The warming was particularly obvious across most of the eastern half of the country in December, when many places saw temperatures 30 degrees above normal and many records were set.
This mirrored changes seen in the Arctic that month, when temperatures rise sharply to 50 degrees above normal. Part of this warming was driven by a strong El Niño, or periodic warming in the Pacific Ocean, but some of it can also be attributed to global warming, says meteorologist Eric Holthaus, who was not involved with the federal report.
The analysis comes less than a month after the U.S. and 194 other countries signed an agreement in Paris to more aggressively counter the effects of climate change. “Even if all the initial targets in Paris are met, we’ll only be part of the way there when it comes to reducing carbon from the atmosphere,” said President Barack Obama at the time. Still, the agreement represented “a turning point” by setting up “the architecture" for doing so, he said.
NOAA's climate monitoring center doesn't issue predictions for future weather, but the agency's Climate Prediction Center does. That team's forecast for the next three months calls for warmer-than-average temperatures in much of the country, although parts of Texas and the Southeast may be a little cooler than usual. As Lancaster University Professor Gail Whiteman told the Weather Channel, "climate change means extreme weather is the new normal."
41. According to the NOAA’s report, we can know that ____ .
A. 2015 is the second hottest year on record in the US
B. 2015 was the warmest year on record for the whole planet
C. 2015 was the wettest on record in the US
D. 2015 saw things heat up and get out of hand
42. What disasters hit the US in 2015?
A. flood, hurricane and storm
B. tornado, wildfire and drought
C. drought, flood and storm
D. wildfire, earthquake and storm
43. Which of the following is not the cause of the warming in the Arctic?
A. strong El Niño
B. periodic warming in the Pacific Ocean
C. global warming,
D. carbon reduction
44. Gail Whiteman’s words implies that _________.
A. extreme weather is becoming more and more frequent
B. climate change lead to extreme weather
C. We will not have normal weather any more
D. Climate change is quite normal.
45. Which of the following statement is not true?
A. 2012 is the hottest year on record in the US.
B. 10 weather-related disasters caused at least $1 billion in damage in the US.
C. The 20 century average temperature is 52°F.
D. The US and many other countries will adopt measures to deal with the climate change.
B
A few things to consider before booking a flight:
With fuel costs rising and airlines finding more fees to impose on travelers every day, airfare isn’t getting any cheaper. Since you can’t drive to all your dream destinations, flying is the only way to go sometimes and, undeniably, the fastest. Luckily, there are plenty of ways to find the most affordable fares and also avoid paying as many extra charges as possible when you plan ahead.
Getting the best fare
Airlines put out their fare sales on Tuesday morning, making this day the best day to book a flight for less.
Fly during the least popular times.
Tuesday, Wednesday and Saturday are the slowest days to fly, which means cheaper deals than the rest of the week. You can also find reduced rates on early morning flights, since many people don’t like to get up before the sun to get to the airport. Earlier boarding times can also considerably cut down your chances of getting bumped on an overbooked flight or delayed because of other delayed flights or mechanical issues.
Choose your seat later.
Some airlines charge you to pick your seat when you book online, adding even more to the bottom line of your ticket cost. If you show up early on your travel day, you can still get suitable seats. Some of the best seats get held back until flight day, unless others are willing to pay extra for them ahead of time, so you still have the chance at one of those.
Fly on holidays.
You already know that summer is the most expensive time to fly, and even though most other times are more affordable, the days surrounding holidays can be crazy. Save big if you’re willing to travel on major holidays, such as Thanksgiving and Christmas.
Don’t wait until the last-minute to book.
Many travelers don’t know that there’s a sweet spot for booking and getting
the best price on your tickets. Book too early or too late and you could end up paying more than you need to. The best time to book is between three months and six weeks from when you want to travel.
Avoiding extra fees
Airlines will charge for just about anything these days. Some have even toyed around with charging customers for using the restroom. All those extra fees can certainly add up, but there’s no reason to pay them if you don’t have to. Here are some tips to keep money in your wallet once you get to the airport.
Do you have a tried and true method of getting the best deal on your flights? Let us know.
46. Why do we choose flying to our destination?
A. The airfare is getting cheaper.
B. Sometimes it is the only way to go.
C. It doesn’t need extra money
D. The fuel cost is rising,
47. Rate on early morning flight is usually reduced because_____.
A. many people don’t like to get up early.
B. it can reduce the chance of getting on an overbooked flight
C. It can avoid the delayed because of the flight
D. It is the slowest time to fly.
48. If you want to get a suitable seat without paying extra money, you’d better ____.
A. pick your seat when you book online.
B. show up early on your travel day
C. hold back the best seat until flight day
D. pay the airfare ahead of time
49. You can’t get the best ticket by _________.
A. booking between 40-90days before your trip
B. reserving on Tuesday mornings
C. choosing to fly on major holidays
D. fixing the time on summer
C
The relationship between exercise and cancer has long puzzled experts.
Exercise is strongly associated with lowered risks for many types of cancer. People who regularly exercise generally prove to be much less likely to develop or die from the disease than people who do not. At the same time, exercise involves biological stress, which typically leads to a short-term increase in inflammation（炎症） throughout the body. Inflammation can contribute to higher risks for many cancers. Now, a new study in mice may offer some clues into the relationship between exercise and cancer. It suggests that exercise may change how the immune system deals with cancer by boosting certain immune cells and other chemicals that, together, can relieve cancer or fight it off altogether.
To try to better understand how exercise can protect the body against cancer, scientists at the University of Copenhagen in Denmark and other institutions decided
to closely examine what happens inside mice at high risk for the disease.
The scientists first implanted skin cancer cells into the mice before providing half of them with running wheels in their cages while the other animals nothing. After four weeks, far fewer of the runners had increased the cancer cells than the sitting animals and those that had been diagnosed with the disease showed fewer and smaller damage.
In a way, running seemed to be helpful in fighting against the cancer.
Next, the scientists undertook the far more challenging task of making the process backward. To start, they drew blood from both the runners and sitting animals and cancer cells in both groups. Then they looked at how the various samples were different.
As expected, they found much higher levels of the beneficial chemicals in the blood of the exercising animals, especially right after they had been working out on the wheels but also at other times of the day.
So the scientists repeated their original experiment multiple times. But in some of these follow-up experiments, they injected the runners with a substance that blocked the production of beneficial chemicals and gave sitting animals large doses of added chemicals.
Then they again looked at the animals’ blood and other cells.
What they now saw was that when running mice could not produce certain chemicals, they developed cancer at the same rate as the sitting animals, while the sitting animals that had been injected with extra chemicals fought off their cancer better than other sitting mice.
With these results, “we show that voluntary wheel running in mice can reduce the growth of cancer” said Pernille Hojman, a researcher at the University of Copenhagen who oversaw the new study.
“But mice, obviously, are not people, and it is impossible to know from this study whether a similar process occurs in humans. ”Dr. Hojman said.
“So the theory,” she said, “that seemed to partially protect the running mice in this study from cancer, can also happen in people,” If we still need it, to get up and move.
50. By doing the experiment, the scientists wanted to _______.
A. better understand how exercise can protect the body against cancer
B. prove exercise can contribute to higher risk for many cancers
C. undertake a challenging task of making the process
D. show moderately intense exercise will increase beneficial chemicals in people.
51. The passage main tells us that ________.
A．exercise can partly protect people from cancer
B. good chemicals can be produced by exercise
C. the relationship between exercise and cancer
D．if we need it, to get up and move
52. What’s the writer’s attitude towards exercise?
A. Critical B. supportive C. doubtful D. unknown
53. Through the passage we can infer that_______.
A. the same process occurs in human
B．exercise will raise the risk of cancer
C. the runners had increased he cancer cells in the study
D. the exercising animals produced more good chemicals than the sittings
54. What does the underlined word in paragraph 2 mean?
A. promoting B. killing C. using D. protecting
D
My mom only had one eye. I hated her„ she was such an embarrassment.
I remember that it was field day, and my mom came. I was so embarrassed that I threw her a hateful look and ran out. The next day at school„ “Your mom only has one eye?!” and they laugh at me.
I wished that my mom would just disappear from this world so I said to my mom, “Mom, why don’t you have the other eye?! You’re only going to make me a laughingstock. Why don’t you just die?” My mom did not respond.
That night„ I woke up, and went to the kitchen to get a glass of water. My mom was crying there, so quietly, as if she was afraid that she might wake me. I took a look at her, and then turned away. I told myself that I would grow up and become successful, because I hated my one-eyed mom and our desperate poverty.
Then I studied really hard. I left my mother and came to Seoul and studied, and got accepted in the Seoul University with all the confidence I had. Then, I got married. I bought a house of my own. Then I had kids, too. Now I’m living happily as a successful man. I like it here because it’s a place that doesn’t remind me of my mom.
This happiness was getting bigger and bigger, when someone unexpected came to see me. It was my mother„ Still with her one eye. It felt as if the whole sky was falling apart on me. My little girl ran away, scared of my mom’s eye.
And I asked her, “Who are you? I don’t know you!!” as if I tried to make that real. I screamed at her “How dare you come to my house and scare my daughter! Get out of here now!!” And to this, my mother quietly answered, “oh, I’m so sorry. I may have gotten the wrong address,” and she disappeared. Thank goodness„ she doesn’t recognize me. I was quite relieved. I told myself that I wasn’t going to care, or think about this for the rest of my life.
One day, however, a letter regarding a school reunion came to my house. I lied to my wife saying that I was going on a business trip. After the reunion, I went down to the poor house, that I used to call a home„just out of curiosity there, I found my mother fallen on the cold ground. But I did not flow off a single tear. She had a piece of paper in her hand„. it was a letter to me.
She wrote:
My son, I think my life has been long enough now. And„ I won’t visit Seoul anymore„ but would it be too much to ask if I wanted you to come visit me once in a while? I miss you so much. And I was so glad when I heard you were coming for the reunion. But I decided not to go to the school„. For you„ I’m sorry that I only have one eye, and I was an embarrassment for you. You see, when you were very little, you got into an accident, and lost your eye. As a mother, I couldn’t stand watching
you having to grow up with only one eye„ so I gave you mine„ I was so proud of my son that was seeing a whole new world for me, in my place, with that eye. I was never upset at you for anything you did. The couple times that you were angry with me. I thought to myself, ‘it’s because he loves me.’ I miss the times when you were still young around me. I miss you so much. I love you. You mean the world to me.
My World is falling down. I hated the person who only lived for me . I cried for My Mother, I didn’t know of any way that will make up for my worst deeds„
55. When I saw my mom cry in the kitchen, __________.
A. I realized that I had hurt her feelings very badly
B. I hated to be a laughingstock
C. it reminded me of my field day
D. I knew she wanted to wake me up
56. The reason why I determined to be successful is _______.
A. I wanted to study in the Seoul University
B. I didn’t want my mom cry again
C. I hated my one-eyed mom and desperate poverty
D. my classmates laughed at me
57. When the mother went to Seoul to visit her son,___________.
A. she didn’t recognize her son
B. she had got the wrong address
C. she was happy to see her son
D. she didn’t want to get her son embarrassed
58. My mom lost her eye because _________.
A. she got into an accident
B. she gave it to her son
C. she missed her son
D. she was upset at me
59. When I knew the truth, I felt _______.
A. relieved B. excited C. regretful D. angry
60. The best title of the passage should be ________.
A. My family B. My Embarrassing Mom
D. Mom’s letter D. My Mom’s Eye
第二节：下面文章中有5处（第61～65题）。需要添加小标题。请从下列选项（A、B、C、
D、E和F）中选出与他的回答相匹配的选项，并在答题纸上将相应选项的标号涂黑。选项中有一项是多余选项。（改编自托福材料）
A. Expand your vocabulary.
B. Think in English while writing.
C. Read good literature.
D. Use your word processing software
E. Write with agreed voice.
F. Vary your sentence structures.
How to Improve a good English Writing
Whether you're learning English as a second language or are a native speaker who's never had the skills for writing, improving your English composition skills is very important. Knowing your shortcomings and practicing will allow you to write prose that is at first simply grammatically correct and eventually sparkling with style. To do this you may need the following suggestions. ____61 It will give your audience a more vivid picture. Several dictionary websites offer word-of-the-day emails that you can add to your storage of word choices. Using descriptive words within context can grab the reader's attention and contribute to a better writing style. ____62 Using varied sentence structures gives writing a visual appeal. Simple sentences may be easy to write, but using compound sentences allows you to convey a more complex message. Examine what sentence structures you currently use and practice structures that you tend to avoid. ____63 If you're a native speaker of a different language, having to translate in your head slows you down, and can easily lead to errors. Study English grammar if you are having difficulties. Look up the rules whenever you're having difficulties or read a grammar book all the way through. It may be boring, but it's extremely helpful. ____64 Decide which tense to use for a particular piece and stay within that tense. If you are writing an essay, use third person throughout. If you are writing a story, first person may be a good option. Keeping agreement within the voice you have chosen will improve the quality of your work. _____65 One of the best ways to improve writing is to learn from others. Reading literature in the style you want to learn more about can benefit your own writing style and give you inspiration.
Practice writing! The more you write, the better writer you'll become. Every skill requires regular repetition to achieve mastery, whether playing a musical instrument, flying a jet or writing good English essays. Practice does indeed make perfect
第II卷
第三部分：写作（共两节，满分40分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）(原创)
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
第二节：书面表达（满分30分）
生活中人人都有不同的习惯。最近你班进行了有关“好习惯，好未来”的讨论，探讨了
好习惯的积极作用，坏习惯的负面影响，以及如何培养好习惯。请你用英语写一篇短文，谈
谈你对这个问题的看法。
注意：
1. 对所有讨论内容逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译；
2. 词数100-120.开头已经写好，不计入总次数。
Recently we have had a discussion about good habits for the future. As we all
know, positive habits will make a great difference to our future.
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2016年高考模拟试卷英语参考答案与评分标准
第一部分：英语知识运用（共两节，满分30分）
第一节：单项填空（共20小题；每小题0. 5分，满分10分）
D C A B C C A B C B A D D A D B D A C A
第二节：完形填空（共20小题，每小题1分，满分20分）
D C B D A C D A C C A B A B A C A B C A
第二部分：阅读理解（第一节20小题，第二节5小题；每小题2分，满分50分）
第一节：
A C D A B B A B D A C B D A A C D B C D
第二节
A F B E C
第三部分：写作（共两节，满分40分）
the another
This sentence tells us that we shouldn't get discouraged after failures. However,
Rather/ Instead consists
efforts through failures.
At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So exciting was
excited
I that I couldn't wait ∧try my hand at riding it. However, it was harder than
to
expected. The bike seem too heavy and difficult to control. Worse still, I took seemed
many falls off the bike. I was about to give up while my father came and encouraged
that
should stick at it.
第二节：书面表达（满分30分）
Recently we have had a discussion about good habits for the future. As we all
know, positive habits will make a great difference to our future.
On the one hand, positive habits like working hard make us aware of the
significance of life and help us to live a better life we are desperate for. What’s
more, during the process of developing good habits, we’ll shape ourselves and make
greater contributions to society. On the other hand, negative habits are destructive to us since they mislead us to do things carelessly, which discourages us from achieving success.
As for how we develop good habits, what’s commonly believed is that life is a constant fight between good habits and bad habits. Patience is to developing good habits what water is to fish, so we’d better remind ourselves to stick to good habits. In addition, good habits are created by repetition. Only in this way can we own good habits and guarantee a bright future.
一、评分原则
1、本题总分为30分，按5个档次给分。
2、评分时，应根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3、词数少于90和多于130的，从总分中减去2分。
4、评分时，应注意的主要内容：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文连贯性及语言的得体性。
5、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。
二、内容要点：(略)
三、各档次的给分范围和要求：
第五档次（很好）：（25-30分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。
-覆盖所有内容要点。
-应用较多的语法结构和词汇。
-语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强 的语言运用能力。
-有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档（好）（19-24分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。
-虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。
-应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
-语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试复杂语法结构或词汇所致。 -应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档（适当）：（13-18）基本完成了试题规定的任务。
-虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。
-应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
-有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
-应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档（较差）：（7—12分）未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
-漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
-语法结构单调，词汇知识有限。
-有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。
-较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。
信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档（差）：（1-6分）未完成试题规定的任务。
-明显遗漏主要内容，写一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。
-语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
-较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。
-缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
信息未能传达给读者。
0分
未能传达给读者任何信息；内容太少、无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
四、说明
1. 内容要点可用不同方式表达
2. 对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分
2016年高考模拟试卷英语卷
考试时间120分钟满分120分
第I卷
第一部分：英语知识运用（共两节，满分30分）
第一节：单项填空（共20小题；每小题0. 5分，满分10分）
从A、B、C和D四个选项中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题纸上将该选项标号涂黑。
1. --- Delicious food and professional service!
--- _____________!(原创)
A. All right. B. With pleasure
C. It couldn’t be better D. Nice having you
2. Nowadays, ______ new policy that the government asks its people to delay retirement is becoming ______ hot issue. (原创)
A. a, the B. the, the C. the, a D. a, a
3. She survived the fire, but unfortunately her house was damaged ______ repair.
(原创)
A. beyond B. over C. under D. against
4. I found it a shock that he ______ be such a rude man. (原创)
A. would B. should C. must D. could
5. ______ will be given to those who acquire experience and skills. (原创)
A. prediction B. preparation C. preference D. Presence
6. It was the news ______ he was awarded an iphone 6 for his succeeding in the competition ______ let him lie awake for a whole night. (原创)
A. which, which B. which, that C. that, that D. that, which
7. It _______ that he had been telling lies. (原创)
A. come out B. come up C. come along D. come about
8. He will not attend the meeting next month, because he ______
himself in Los Angeles then. （改编自五三）
A. is enjoying B. will be enjoying C. enjoys D. enjoyed
9. Without good instructions of the coach, one will probably ______ a lot of bad
habits while you are exercising in gyms. (改编自全品)
A. take up B. bring up C. pick up D. put up
10.--- What’s your plan for the weekend?
--- ______ a composition, I am going to finish my math homework.(改编自高
考零距离突破)
A. In addition B. Apart from C. Instead of D. Thanks to
11.We need a capable leader, ______ with straightforward personality and good
humour.(改编自全品)
A. one B. the one C. who D. that
12.______ has been announced that we will have another exam next week.(原创)
A. Which B. That C. As D. It
13.Do you think the robot will ______ take the place of human beings?
A. especially B. merely C. frequently D. finally
14.--- can you lend me the book Jane Eyre?
--- sorry, I returned it to the library just now. maybe it is still ______.
A. available B. affordable C. acceptable D. valuable
15.It is necessary and important that the websites check their cooperator’s
______ to protect their rights. (改编自高考零距离)
A． purpose B. relationship C. administration D. reliability
16.--- If the traffic ______ not so bad, I ______ here on time.(原创)
--- What a pity! Your just missed the most fantastic scene.
A. were, could be B. was, could have been
C. had been, could have been D. were, could have been
th 17.The voyage of travellers before the 17 century show that they were not ______
the sea even though they didn’t have modern navigational aids.
A. at the expense of B. at the risk of
C. in the way of D. at the mercy of
18.______ your watch five minutes ahead is an effective way to avoid being late.
A. Setting B. Being set C. Having set D. set
19.The patient was very impolite to the doctor, ______ made the doctor more angry.
A. who B. what C. which D. whom
20.--- You are confident about the job interview, aren’t you?
---______. I’m well prepared and feel I’ve got everything they need.
A. Sure, I am B. It’s hard to say
C. Well, maybe D. I hope so
第二节：完形填空（共20小题，每小题1分，满分20分）（原创）
阅读下面短文，掌握其大意，然后从 21～40 各题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中，选出最佳选项，并在答题纸上将该选项标号涂黑。
Once upon a time, there lived a big mango tree. A little boy loved to come and play around it everyday. Time went by, the little boy grew, and he no longer 21 around the tree. One day, the boy __22__ to the tree with a sad look on his face. “Come and play with me,” the tree asked. “I am __23__ a kid, I don’t play around trees anymore.” The boy replied, “I want toys. I need __24__ to buy them.” “Sorry, I don’t have money„ but you can __25__ all my mangoes and sell them so you will have money.” The boy picked all the mangoes on the tree and left happily. The boy didn’t come back. The tree was sad. One day, the boy __26__ a man returned. The tree was so __27 _. “Come and play with me,” the tree said. “I don’t have time to play. I have to work for my family. We need a __28 _ for shelter. Can you help me?” “Sorry, I don’t have a house, but you can cut my branches to __29 _ your house.” The man did so and left happily. The tree was glad to see him happy but the boy didn’t come back afterward. The tree was again lonely and sad.
One hot summer day, the man __30 _ and the tree was delighted. “Come and play with me!” The tree said. “I am getting __31 _. I want to go sailing to __32 _ myself. Can you give me a boat?” “Use my trunk to build your boat. You can sail far away and be happy.” So the man cut the tree trunk to make a boat. He went __33 _ and didn’t come back for a long time.
Finally, the man returned many years later. “Sorry, my boy, __34_ I don’t have anything for you anymore. No more mangoes to give you.” The tree said. “I don’t have teeth to bite,” the man replied. “No more trunk for you to __35 _.” “I am too old for that now,” the man said.
“I really can’t give you__36 , the only thing left is my dying__37 _,” the tree said with sadness. “I don’t need much now, just a place to__38 _. I am tired after all these years,” the man replied. “Good! Old tree roots are the best place to __39 _ and rest. Come sit down with me and rest.” The boy sat down and the tree was __40_ and smiled.
21. A. climbed B. ate C. sat D. played
22. A. came up B. came along C. came back D. came out
23. A. always B. no longer C. would rather D. used to
24. A. mangoes B. trees C. time D. money
25. A. pick B. buy C. eat D. go
26. A. brought into B. taken into C. grown into D. knocked into
27. A. sad B. interested C. worried D. excited
28. A. a house B. a tree C. a rest D. a family
29. A. decorate B. paint C. build D. plant
30. A. went B. left C. returned D. replied
31. A. old B. young C. fat D. strong
32. A. educate B. relax C. paid D. help
33. A. sailing B. fishing C. hiking D. exercising
34. A. meanwhile B. but C. though D. however
35. A. climb on B. stand by C. talk about D. eat up
36. A. something B. everything C. anything D. nothing
37. A. roots B. leaves C. body D. trunk
38. A. live B. rest C. stay D. go
39. A. rely on B. focus on C. lean on D. fix on
40. A. glad B. sad C. tired D. anxious
第二部分：阅读理解（第一节20小题，第二节5小题；每小题2分，满分50分）（原创）
第一节：阅读下列材料，从每题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中，选出最佳选项，并在答题纸上将该选项标号涂黑。
A
2015 Was a Warm, Wild Year. What’s Next?
2015 saw things heat up and get out of hand, and not just in politics.
A record warm December raised average temperatures enough to make 2015 the second hottest year on record in the United States, according to the National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration's National Climate Monitoring Annual Report,
which was released Thursday.
The United Nations had previously reported that 2015 was shaping up to be the warmest year on record for the whole planet.
Last year was also the third wettest on record in the U.S. and saw ten weather- or climate-related disasters that each caused at least $1 billion in damage in the U.S. and killed a total of 155 people. These include a drought, two floods, five severe storms, a wildfire, and a winter storm.
The average U.S. temperature was 54.4°F, 2.4°F above the 20th century average, and second only to 2012's record warmth. This was also the 19th year with average temperatures above the average for the century.
Every state reported above-average annual temperatures. The warming was particularly obvious across most of the eastern half of the country in December, when many places saw temperatures 30 degrees above normal and many records were set.
This mirrored changes seen in the Arctic that month, when temperatures rise sharply to 50 degrees above normal. Part of this warming was driven by a strong El Niño, or periodic warming in the Pacific Ocean, but some of it can also be attributed to global warming, says meteorologist Eric Holthaus, who was not involved with the federal report.
The analysis comes less than a month after the U.S. and 194 other countries signed an agreement in Paris to more aggressively counter the effects of climate change. “Even if all the initial targets in Paris are met, we’ll only be part of the way there when it comes to reducing carbon from the atmosphere,” said President Barack Obama at the time. Still, the agreement represented “a turning point” by setting up “the architecture" for doing so, he said.
NOAA's climate monitoring center doesn't issue predictions for future weather, but the agency's Climate Prediction Center does. That team's forecast for the next three months calls for warmer-than-average temperatures in much of the country, although parts of Texas and the Southeast may be a little cooler than usual. As Lancaster University Professor Gail Whiteman told the Weather Channel, "climate change means extreme weather is the new normal."
41. According to the NOAA’s report, we can know that ____ .
A. 2015 is the second hottest year on record in the US
B. 2015 was the warmest year on record for the whole planet
C. 2015 was the wettest on record in the US
D. 2015 saw things heat up and get out of hand
42. What disasters hit the US in 2015?
A. flood, hurricane and storm
B. tornado, wildfire and drought
C. drought, flood and storm
D. wildfire, earthquake and storm
43. Which of the following is not the cause of the warming in the Arctic?
A. strong El Niño
B. periodic warming in the Pacific Ocean
C. global warming,
D. carbon reduction
44. Gail Whiteman’s words implies that _________.
A. extreme weather is becoming more and more frequent
B. climate change lead to extreme weather
C. We will not have normal weather any more
D. Climate change is quite normal.
45. Which of the following statement is not true?
A. 2012 is the hottest year on record in the US.
B. 10 weather-related disasters caused at least $1 billion in damage in the US.
C. The 20 century average temperature is 52°F.
D. The US and many other countries will adopt measures to deal with the climate change.
B
A few things to consider before booking a flight:
With fuel costs rising and airlines finding more fees to impose on travelers every day, airfare isn’t getting any cheaper. Since you can’t drive to all your dream destinations, flying is the only way to go sometimes and, undeniably, the fastest. Luckily, there are plenty of ways to find the most affordable fares and also avoid paying as many extra charges as possible when you plan ahead.
Getting the best fare
Airlines put out their fare sales on Tuesday morning, making this day the best day to book a flight for less.
Fly during the least popular times.
Tuesday, Wednesday and Saturday are the slowest days to fly, which means cheaper deals than the rest of the week. You can also find reduced rates on early morning flights, since many people don’t like to get up before the sun to get to the airport. Earlier boarding times can also considerably cut down your chances of getting bumped on an overbooked flight or delayed because of other delayed flights or mechanical issues.
Choose your seat later.
Some airlines charge you to pick your seat when you book online, adding even more to the bottom line of your ticket cost. If you show up early on your travel day, you can still get suitable seats. Some of the best seats get held back until flight day, unless others are willing to pay extra for them ahead of time, so you still have the chance at one of those.
Fly on holidays.
You already know that summer is the most expensive time to fly, and even though most other times are more affordable, the days surrounding holidays can be crazy. Save big if you’re willing to travel on major holidays, such as Thanksgiving and Christmas.
Don’t wait until the last-minute to book.
Many travelers don’t know that there’s a sweet spot for booking and getting
the best price on your tickets. Book too early or too late and you could end up paying more than you need to. The best time to book is between three months and six weeks from when you want to travel.
Avoiding extra fees
Airlines will charge for just about anything these days. Some have even toyed around with charging customers for using the restroom. All those extra fees can certainly add up, but there’s no reason to pay them if you don’t have to. Here are some tips to keep money in your wallet once you get to the airport.
Do you have a tried and true method of getting the best deal on your flights? Let us know.
46. Why do we choose flying to our destination?
A. The airfare is getting cheaper.
B. Sometimes it is the only way to go.
C. It doesn’t need extra money
D. The fuel cost is rising,
47. Rate on early morning flight is usually reduced because_____.
A. many people don’t like to get up early.
B. it can reduce the chance of getting on an overbooked flight
C. It can avoid the delayed because of the flight
D. It is the slowest time to fly.
48. If you want to get a suitable seat without paying extra money, you’d better ____.
A. pick your seat when you book online.
B. show up early on your travel day
C. hold back the best seat until flight day
D. pay the airfare ahead of time
49. You can’t get the best ticket by _________.
A. booking between 40-90days before your trip
B. reserving on Tuesday mornings
C. choosing to fly on major holidays
D. fixing the time on summer
C
The relationship between exercise and cancer has long puzzled experts.
Exercise is strongly associated with lowered risks for many types of cancer. People who regularly exercise generally prove to be much less likely to develop or die from the disease than people who do not. At the same time, exercise involves biological stress, which typically leads to a short-term increase in inflammation（炎症） throughout the body. Inflammation can contribute to higher risks for many cancers. Now, a new study in mice may offer some clues into the relationship between exercise and cancer. It suggests that exercise may change how the immune system deals with cancer by boosting certain immune cells and other chemicals that, together, can relieve cancer or fight it off altogether.
To try to better understand how exercise can protect the body against cancer, scientists at the University of Copenhagen in Denmark and other institutions decided
to closely examine what happens inside mice at high risk for the disease.
The scientists first implanted skin cancer cells into the mice before providing half of them with running wheels in their cages while the other animals nothing. After four weeks, far fewer of the runners had increased the cancer cells than the sitting animals and those that had been diagnosed with the disease showed fewer and smaller damage.
In a way, running seemed to be helpful in fighting against the cancer.
Next, the scientists undertook the far more challenging task of making the process backward. To start, they drew blood from both the runners and sitting animals and cancer cells in both groups. Then they looked at how the various samples were different.
As expected, they found much higher levels of the beneficial chemicals in the blood of the exercising animals, especially right after they had been working out on the wheels but also at other times of the day.
So the scientists repeated their original experiment multiple times. But in some of these follow-up experiments, they injected the runners with a substance that blocked the production of beneficial chemicals and gave sitting animals large doses of added chemicals.
Then they again looked at the animals’ blood and other cells.
What they now saw was that when running mice could not produce certain chemicals, they developed cancer at the same rate as the sitting animals, while the sitting animals that had been injected with extra chemicals fought off their cancer better than other sitting mice.
With these results, “we show that voluntary wheel running in mice can reduce the growth of cancer” said Pernille Hojman, a researcher at the University of Copenhagen who oversaw the new study.
“But mice, obviously, are not people, and it is impossible to know from this study whether a similar process occurs in humans. ”Dr. Hojman said.
“So the theory,” she said, “that seemed to partially protect the running mice in this study from cancer, can also happen in people,” If we still need it, to get up and move.
50. By doing the experiment, the scientists wanted to _______.
A. better understand how exercise can protect the body against cancer
B. prove exercise can contribute to higher risk for many cancers
C. undertake a challenging task of making the process
D. show moderately intense exercise will increase beneficial chemicals in people.
51. The passage main tells us that ________.
A．exercise can partly protect people from cancer
B. good chemicals can be produced by exercise
C. the relationship between exercise and cancer
D．if we need it, to get up and move
52. What’s the writer’s attitude towards exercise?
A. Critical B. supportive C. doubtful D. unknown
53. Through the passage we can infer that_______.
A. the same process occurs in human
B．exercise will raise the risk of cancer
C. the runners had increased he cancer cells in the study
D. the exercising animals produced more good chemicals than the sittings
54. What does the underlined word in paragraph 2 mean?
A. promoting B. killing C. using D. protecting
D
My mom only had one eye. I hated her„ she was such an embarrassment.
I remember that it was field day, and my mom came. I was so embarrassed that I threw her a hateful look and ran out. The next day at school„ “Your mom only has one eye?!” and they laugh at me.
I wished that my mom would just disappear from this world so I said to my mom, “Mom, why don’t you have the other eye?! You’re only going to make me a laughingstock. Why don’t you just die?” My mom did not respond.
That night„ I woke up, and went to the kitchen to get a glass of water. My mom was crying there, so quietly, as if she was afraid that she might wake me. I took a look at her, and then turned away. I told myself that I would grow up and become successful, because I hated my one-eyed mom and our desperate poverty.
Then I studied really hard. I left my mother and came to Seoul and studied, and got accepted in the Seoul University with all the confidence I had. Then, I got married. I bought a house of my own. Then I had kids, too. Now I’m living happily as a successful man. I like it here because it’s a place that doesn’t remind me of my mom.
This happiness was getting bigger and bigger, when someone unexpected came to see me. It was my mother„ Still with her one eye. It felt as if the whole sky was falling apart on me. My little girl ran away, scared of my mom’s eye.
And I asked her, “Who are you? I don’t know you!!” as if I tried to make that real. I screamed at her “How dare you come to my house and scare my daughter! Get out of here now!!” And to this, my mother quietly answered, “oh, I’m so sorry. I may have gotten the wrong address,” and she disappeared. Thank goodness„ she doesn’t recognize me. I was quite relieved. I told myself that I wasn’t going to care, or think about this for the rest of my life.
One day, however, a letter regarding a school reunion came to my house. I lied to my wife saying that I was going on a business trip. After the reunion, I went down to the poor house, that I used to call a home„just out of curiosity there, I found my mother fallen on the cold ground. But I did not flow off a single tear. She had a piece of paper in her hand„. it was a letter to me.
She wrote:
My son, I think my life has been long enough now. And„ I won’t visit Seoul anymore„ but would it be too much to ask if I wanted you to come visit me once in a while? I miss you so much. And I was so glad when I heard you were coming for the reunion. But I decided not to go to the school„. For you„ I’m sorry that I only have one eye, and I was an embarrassment for you. You see, when you were very little, you got into an accident, and lost your eye. As a mother, I couldn’t stand watching
you having to grow up with only one eye„ so I gave you mine„ I was so proud of my son that was seeing a whole new world for me, in my place, with that eye. I was never upset at you for anything you did. The couple times that you were angry with me. I thought to myself, ‘it’s because he loves me.’ I miss the times when you were still young around me. I miss you so much. I love you. You mean the world to me.
My World is falling down. I hated the person who only lived for me . I cried for My Mother, I didn’t know of any way that will make up for my worst deeds„
55. When I saw my mom cry in the kitchen, __________.
A. I realized that I had hurt her feelings very badly
B. I hated to be a laughingstock
C. it reminded me of my field day
D. I knew she wanted to wake me up
56. The reason why I determined to be successful is _______.
A. I wanted to study in the Seoul University
B. I didn’t want my mom cry again
C. I hated my one-eyed mom and desperate poverty
D. my classmates laughed at me
57. When the mother went to Seoul to visit her son,___________.
A. she didn’t recognize her son
B. she had got the wrong address
C. she was happy to see her son
D. she didn’t want to get her son embarrassed
58. My mom lost her eye because _________.
A. she got into an accident
B. she gave it to her son
C. she missed her son
D. she was upset at me
59. When I knew the truth, I felt _______.
A. relieved B. excited C. regretful D. angry
60. The best title of the passage should be ________.
A. My family B. My Embarrassing Mom
D. Mom’s letter D. My Mom’s Eye
第二节：下面文章中有5处（第61～65题）。需要添加小标题。请从下列选项（A、B、C、
D、E和F）中选出与他的回答相匹配的选项，并在答题纸上将相应选项的标号涂黑。选项中有一项是多余选项。（改编自托福材料）
A. Expand your vocabulary.
B. Think in English while writing.
C. Read good literature.
D. Use your word processing software
E. Write with agreed voice.
F. Vary your sentence structures.
How to Improve a good English Writing
Whether you're learning English as a second language or are a native speaker who's never had the skills for writing, improving your English composition skills is very important. Knowing your shortcomings and practicing will allow you to write prose that is at first simply grammatically correct and eventually sparkling with style. To do this you may need the following suggestions. ____61 It will give your audience a more vivid picture. Several dictionary websites offer word-of-the-day emails that you can add to your storage of word choices. Using descriptive words within context can grab the reader's attention and contribute to a better writing style. ____62 Using varied sentence structures gives writing a visual appeal. Simple sentences may be easy to write, but using compound sentences allows you to convey a more complex message. Examine what sentence structures you currently use and practice structures that you tend to avoid. ____63 If you're a native speaker of a different language, having to translate in your head slows you down, and can easily lead to errors. Study English grammar if you are having difficulties. Look up the rules whenever you're having difficulties or read a grammar book all the way through. It may be boring, but it's extremely helpful. ____64 Decide which tense to use for a particular piece and stay within that tense. If you are writing an essay, use third person throughout. If you are writing a story, first person may be a good option. Keeping agreement within the voice you have chosen will improve the quality of your work. _____65 One of the best ways to improve writing is to learn from others. Reading literature in the style you want to learn more about can benefit your own writing style and give you inspiration.
Practice writing! The more you write, the better writer you'll become. Every skill requires regular repetition to achieve mastery, whether playing a musical instrument, flying a jet or writing good English essays. Practice does indeed make perfect
第II卷
第三部分：写作（共两节，满分40分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）(原创)
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
第二节：书面表达（满分30分）
生活中人人都有不同的习惯。最近你班进行了有关“好习惯，好未来”的讨论，探讨了
好习惯的积极作用，坏习惯的负面影响，以及如何培养好习惯。请你用英语写一篇短文，谈
谈你对这个问题的看法。
注意：
1. 对所有讨论内容逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译；
2. 词数100-120.开头已经写好，不计入总次数。
Recently we have had a discussion about good habits for the future. As we all
know, positive habits will make a great difference to our future.
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2016年高考模拟试卷英语参考答案与评分标准
第一部分：英语知识运用（共两节，满分30分）
第一节：单项填空（共20小题；每小题0. 5分，满分10分）
D C A B C C A B C B A D D A D B D A C A
第二节：完形填空（共20小题，每小题1分，满分20分）
D C B D A C D A C C A B A B A C A B C A
第二部分：阅读理解（第一节20小题，第二节5小题；每小题2分，满分50分）
第一节：
A C D A B B A B D A C B D A A C D B C D
第二节
A F B E C
第三部分：写作（共两节，满分40分）
the another
This sentence tells us that we shouldn't get discouraged after failures. However,
Rather/ Instead consists
efforts through failures.
At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So exciting was
excited
I that I couldn't wait ∧try my hand at riding it. However, it was harder than
to
expected. The bike seem too heavy and difficult to control. Worse still, I took seemed
many falls off the bike. I was about to give up while my father came and encouraged
that
should stick at it.
第二节：书面表达（满分30分）
Recently we have had a discussion about good habits for the future. As we all
know, positive habits will make a great difference to our future.
On the one hand, positive habits like working hard make us aware of the
significance of life and help us to live a better life we are desperate for. What’s
more, during the process of developing good habits, we’ll shape ourselves and make
greater contributions to society. On the other hand, negative habits are destructive to us since they mislead us to do things carelessly, which discourages us from achieving success.
As for how we develop good habits, what’s commonly believed is that life is a constant fight between good habits and bad habits. Patience is to developing good habits what water is to fish, so we’d better remind ourselves to stick to good habits. In addition, good habits are created by repetition. Only in this way can we own good habits and guarantee a bright future.
一、评分原则
1、本题总分为30分，按5个档次给分。
2、评分时，应根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3、词数少于90和多于130的，从总分中减去2分。
4、评分时，应注意的主要内容：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文连贯性及语言的得体性。
5、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。
二、内容要点：(略)
三、各档次的给分范围和要求：
第五档次（很好）：（25-30分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。
-覆盖所有内容要点。
-应用较多的语法结构和词汇。
-语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强 的语言运用能力。
-有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档（好）（19-24分）完全完成了试题规定的任务。
-虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。
-应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
-语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试复杂语法结构或词汇所致。 -应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档（适当）：（13-18）基本完成了试题规定的任务。
-虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。
-应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
-有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
-应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档（较差）：（7—12分）未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
-漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
-语法结构单调，词汇知识有限。
-有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。
-较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。
信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档（差）：（1-6分）未完成试题规定的任务。
-明显遗漏主要内容，写一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。
-语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
-较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。
-缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
信息未能传达给读者。
0分
未能传达给读者任何信息；内容太少、无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
四、说明
1. 内容要点可用不同方式表达
2. 对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分