社会热点话题写作 逻辑结构
Paragraph 1: (1) 概括性的引出要评论的事物或观点（general）；
Paragraph 2: (1) 作者对该现象或问题的原
因，用主题句。
(2) 支持性的细节分论点（至少两点）；
Paragraph 3: 总结全文，定下结论（通常对策）
四级作文试题2000年1月
Directions:
For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1. 上大学的费用（tuition fees）可以通过多
多种途径解决。
2. 哪种途径适合我（说明理由）。
How I Finance My College Education
第一段：首先，应该是用一种描述性的语言引出讨论的重点：
现如今Nowadays/ At
, tuition(teaching especially in small groups) fees（money that you pay for professional service, for example to a lawyer, doctor or private school） for college students are much higher than ever before. How to finance my college education has become a matter of concern\has become a _hot issue__ ___.热点问题.
第二段：有多种的方法，例如：1.向父母; 2.银行贷款 3.打工挣钱
第二段主题句：There are many ways to support my college education financially./
Ways to support my university study financially .
第二段分写：
In the first place(when you have several
points you want to make, you can use this expressioin to introduce the first one) 首先，I can get/ gain/ obtain all the money from my parents.
In the second place, a bank loan, especially 另外，What’s more==in ____, I can find
a part time job to earn enough money.
第三段：我所赞同的方法（阐述原因，为何不选其他的方法）。
,I prefer the bank loan for the following reasons.
For ____ ____,(when you give a reason
for something, you think the reason is strong, but it is not the only one) 一方面my parents are not rich enough to afford me.
另一方面For ____, I will not have
enough time and energy to study after finishing my part-time jobs.
另外，In addtition=what’s more, I
believe I can find a rewarding/ dream job after graduation, and then I will be able to Therefore /So
word),..... 因此 /Hence(a foraml
练习范文1：Free Admissions to Museums
1） 越来越多的博物馆免费开放的目的是
什么？
2） 也会带来一些问题
3） 你的看法
Presently, museums in mounting numbers
are open to the public free of charge so that they can attract more individuals. Unfortunately, it has also given rise to some problems never thought of. Confronted with the dilemma, should we carry on the practice? When it comes to this question, people’s views vary from one to another.
Those who are in favor of the policy have
their reasons. The major benefit is that it will provide people, especially those who are unwilling or unable to afford the admission, an access to knowledge in various branches. Besides, they also maintain that museums, like the government, are institutions “of the people,
for the people”. Sponsored by the public, museums are to serve every citizen rich or poor.
But others might not agree, and they are
right in a sense. Their main concern is that limited money from the government is far from enough for daily maintenance, let alone to purchase sophisticated devices which prove to be crucial for all museums. To make the matter worse, too many visitors as a result of free admissions might damage some precious objects exhibited.
For all the problems mentioned, I am sure
they are not obstacles irremovable. Say, departments concerned are expected to allocate more money. In addition, museums themselves are to figure out ways to attract more donations. In a word, we cannot sacrifice the benefit of the public for shining coins from the admission ticket.
范文2：Jobs for Graduates
1) 大学生难找工作
2) 原因很多
3) 解决的办法
第一段概括性描述
With the fantastic development of modern
society, people in ever increasing numbers （高等教育）. As a result, job-hunting is now becoming headache for most graduates.
Nowadays, college graduates come to
realize that it is not easy to get a rewarding job. Most/ Many of them can not get a job right after graduation.
The job market for college students/
graduates is getting tighter and tighter. According to a survey, only 80% of college graduates of the class of 2002 found jobs the year they graduated, compared with 95% in 2000. Why do college graduates find it
increasingly difficult to get jobs?
第二段细节论证
分析原因：
1、Among the most reasons by people for this problem/ phenomenon, one 2、One may the as a 3、is Several years ago, many students were Many graduates are reluctant to work in the
Graduates without working experiences are now losing their appeal for many international cooperations, such as ...
第三段解决办法：
国家制定法律法规；个人接受教育。。。 范文3：
1.目前网络教育形成热潮
2.我认为这股热潮的的原因是……
3.我对网络教育的评价
Online Education
Being online is no longer something strange in our life. To some degree, it has become part of our daily life. We can do a lot of things online, such as searching for information and communicating with friends
far and near. But recently another helpful online activity has become very “in”. That is online education.
Why could online education be so popular within such a short period of time? Among other reasons, the quick development of the internet should be an essential one, which makes all our dreams of attending class in the distance possible. Another underlying reason is the quick development of both society and technology. Today, modern science and technology is developing with lightening speed. To catch up with this development we all feel an urgent and strong desire to study. However, due to the great pace of modern society , many people are too busy to study full time at school. Online education just comes to their aid.
Personally, I appreciate this new form of education. It’s indeed a helpful complement to the traditional educational means. It can
provide different learners with more flexible and versatile ways of learning. Most of all, with online education, we can stick to our jobs and at the same time study and absorb the latest knowledge.
范文4：
1.为孩子聘请家教目前非常普遍
2.家教的利与弊
3.我的看法
Private Tutoring
Private tutoring is “in”. A recent
investigation shows that about 80 percent of pupils have private tutors，
Such a popular practice indicates that people are attaching greater importance to education. Many parents, for various reasons，missed the chance of obtaining a good
education. When their children meet with difficulties in study, they arc helpless. Private tutoring is the only solution. As private tutoring is usually one-to-one, the teacher knows the strong points as we11 as the weak points of the pupil, clearly.
However, private tutoring has its own disadvantages. For one thing, it takes up so much of the pupils’ time that they can hardly find enough time for rest and entertainment, which are essential for their physical and mental health. For another, some teachers, busy “shuttling” from one family to another, tend to neglect their regular teaching duties. What’s more，some teachers are eager to help pupils do well in the test, offering the so-called tips for test-taking rather than help them acquire what is more meaningful.
Generally speaking, its disadvantages outweigh its advantages. Greater emphasis should be laid on classroom teaching and
practice, on the improvement of teaching quality and on the tapping of the pupils’ potentials. Only in this way can we generation be healthily brought up.
范文5： 1.越来越多的人涌入大城市，有些问题随之产生
2.比较明显的大问题有…….
3.我对这种现象的想法
City Problems
Nowadays, millions of migrant workers flock into cities in search of jobs and better living. However, with the sharp rise in the urban population, many problems arise in the development of cities.
Firstly, cities become more and more crowded, putting much pressure upon
transportation, housing, sanitation, education, employment and so on. City services and facilities have been strained to a breaking point. Secondly, a growing number of private cars emit huge amount of carbon dioxide, leaving the air mercilessly polluted. What is more, the city is also threatened by rising crime. Not a single day passes without the report of someone being robbed, kidnapped or murdered. Last but not least, city-dwellers are not only separated from the natural world but also isolated from each other, even not knowing the name of their next-door neighbor. All these problems have harmed the attractiveness of the city. Unless there is some improvement, more and more people may seek to live in the suburbs.
范文6：
1.目前很多父母在孩子高中毕业前就总他们出国学习
2.导致这种趋势的原因是什么
3.我对此的看法
Overseas Study at an Early Age Nowadays more and more parents are
eager to send their children to study abroad before they finish high school by whatever means and at whatever cost.
It is quite understandable for parents to send their children to study overseas because they place high expectations on their children. They are encouraged by the success stories of those who have completed their overseas study. With the development of economy, companies and institutions at home are giving more and more emphasis on overseas experiences, too. Consequently, pursuing overseas study became a kind of short cut（捷径） in gaining a better future. Moreover, there is still one
underlying reason for this rush-economic reason. The rapid economic progress in the past few years in China has enabled more and more parents to afford the huge cost for their children’s overseas study.
As for me, overseas study is surely a helpful way to get both advanced knowledge and necessary experiences, but overseas study at an early age is neither necessary nor benef1cial. The students may be too young to either tend for themselves or think for themselves. I do think that overseas study can contribute to one’s self-improvement, but it’s better to be pursued after one has finished his college study at home, when he is more capable of learning and living on his own.
社会热点话题写作 逻辑结构
Paragraph 1: (1) 概括性的引出要评论的事物或观点（general）；
Paragraph 2: (1) 作者对该现象或问题的原
因，用主题句。
(2) 支持性的细节分论点（至少两点）；
Paragraph 3: 总结全文，定下结论（通常对策）
四级作文试题2000年1月
Directions:
For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1. 上大学的费用（tuition fees）可以通过多
多种途径解决。
2. 哪种途径适合我（说明理由）。
How I Finance My College Education
第一段：首先，应该是用一种描述性的语言引出讨论的重点：
现如今Nowadays/ At
, tuition(teaching especially in small groups) fees（money that you pay for professional service, for example to a lawyer, doctor or private school） for college students are much higher than ever before. How to finance my college education has become a matter of concern\has become a _hot issue__ ___.热点问题.
第二段：有多种的方法，例如：1.向父母; 2.银行贷款 3.打工挣钱
第二段主题句：There are many ways to support my college education financially./
Ways to support my university study financially .
第二段分写：
In the first place(when you have several
points you want to make, you can use this expressioin to introduce the first one) 首先，I can get/ gain/ obtain all the money from my parents.
In the second place, a bank loan, especially 另外，What’s more==in ____, I can find
a part time job to earn enough money.
第三段：我所赞同的方法（阐述原因，为何不选其他的方法）。
,I prefer the bank loan for the following reasons.
For ____ ____,(when you give a reason
for something, you think the reason is strong, but it is not the only one) 一方面my parents are not rich enough to afford me.
另一方面For ____, I will not have
enough time and energy to study after finishing my part-time jobs.
另外，In addtition=what’s more, I
believe I can find a rewarding/ dream job after graduation, and then I will be able to Therefore /So
word),..... 因此 /Hence(a foraml
练习范文1：Free Admissions to Museums
1） 越来越多的博物馆免费开放的目的是
什么？
2） 也会带来一些问题
3） 你的看法
Presently, museums in mounting numbers
are open to the public free of charge so that they can attract more individuals. Unfortunately, it has also given rise to some problems never thought of. Confronted with the dilemma, should we carry on the practice? When it comes to this question, people’s views vary from one to another.
Those who are in favor of the policy have
their reasons. The major benefit is that it will provide people, especially those who are unwilling or unable to afford the admission, an access to knowledge in various branches. Besides, they also maintain that museums, like the government, are institutions “of the people,
for the people”. Sponsored by the public, museums are to serve every citizen rich or poor.
But others might not agree, and they are
right in a sense. Their main concern is that limited money from the government is far from enough for daily maintenance, let alone to purchase sophisticated devices which prove to be crucial for all museums. To make the matter worse, too many visitors as a result of free admissions might damage some precious objects exhibited.
For all the problems mentioned, I am sure
they are not obstacles irremovable. Say, departments concerned are expected to allocate more money. In addition, museums themselves are to figure out ways to attract more donations. In a word, we cannot sacrifice the benefit of the public for shining coins from the admission ticket.
范文2：Jobs for Graduates
1) 大学生难找工作
2) 原因很多
3) 解决的办法
第一段概括性描述
With the fantastic development of modern
society, people in ever increasing numbers （高等教育）. As a result, job-hunting is now becoming headache for most graduates.
Nowadays, college graduates come to
realize that it is not easy to get a rewarding job. Most/ Many of them can not get a job right after graduation.
The job market for college students/
graduates is getting tighter and tighter. According to a survey, only 80% of college graduates of the class of 2002 found jobs the year they graduated, compared with 95% in 2000. Why do college graduates find it
increasingly difficult to get jobs?
第二段细节论证
分析原因：
1、Among the most reasons by people for this problem/ phenomenon, one 2、One may the as a 3、is Several years ago, many students were Many graduates are reluctant to work in the
Graduates without working experiences are now losing their appeal for many international cooperations, such as ...
第三段解决办法：
国家制定法律法规；个人接受教育。。。 范文3：
1.目前网络教育形成热潮
2.我认为这股热潮的的原因是……
3.我对网络教育的评价
Online Education
Being online is no longer something strange in our life. To some degree, it has become part of our daily life. We can do a lot of things online, such as searching for information and communicating with friends
far and near. But recently another helpful online activity has become very “in”. That is online education.
Why could online education be so popular within such a short period of time? Among other reasons, the quick development of the internet should be an essential one, which makes all our dreams of attending class in the distance possible. Another underlying reason is the quick development of both society and technology. Today, modern science and technology is developing with lightening speed. To catch up with this development we all feel an urgent and strong desire to study. However, due to the great pace of modern society , many people are too busy to study full time at school. Online education just comes to their aid.
Personally, I appreciate this new form of education. It’s indeed a helpful complement to the traditional educational means. It can
provide different learners with more flexible and versatile ways of learning. Most of all, with online education, we can stick to our jobs and at the same time study and absorb the latest knowledge.
范文4：
1.为孩子聘请家教目前非常普遍
2.家教的利与弊
3.我的看法
Private Tutoring
Private tutoring is “in”. A recent
investigation shows that about 80 percent of pupils have private tutors，
Such a popular practice indicates that people are attaching greater importance to education. Many parents, for various reasons，missed the chance of obtaining a good
education. When their children meet with difficulties in study, they arc helpless. Private tutoring is the only solution. As private tutoring is usually one-to-one, the teacher knows the strong points as we11 as the weak points of the pupil, clearly.
However, private tutoring has its own disadvantages. For one thing, it takes up so much of the pupils’ time that they can hardly find enough time for rest and entertainment, which are essential for their physical and mental health. For another, some teachers, busy “shuttling” from one family to another, tend to neglect their regular teaching duties. What’s more，some teachers are eager to help pupils do well in the test, offering the so-called tips for test-taking rather than help them acquire what is more meaningful.
Generally speaking, its disadvantages outweigh its advantages. Greater emphasis should be laid on classroom teaching and
practice, on the improvement of teaching quality and on the tapping of the pupils’ potentials. Only in this way can we generation be healthily brought up.
范文5： 1.越来越多的人涌入大城市，有些问题随之产生
2.比较明显的大问题有…….
3.我对这种现象的想法
City Problems
Nowadays, millions of migrant workers flock into cities in search of jobs and better living. However, with the sharp rise in the urban population, many problems arise in the development of cities.
Firstly, cities become more and more crowded, putting much pressure upon
transportation, housing, sanitation, education, employment and so on. City services and facilities have been strained to a breaking point. Secondly, a growing number of private cars emit huge amount of carbon dioxide, leaving the air mercilessly polluted. What is more, the city is also threatened by rising crime. Not a single day passes without the report of someone being robbed, kidnapped or murdered. Last but not least, city-dwellers are not only separated from the natural world but also isolated from each other, even not knowing the name of their next-door neighbor. All these problems have harmed the attractiveness of the city. Unless there is some improvement, more and more people may seek to live in the suburbs.
范文6：
1.目前很多父母在孩子高中毕业前就总他们出国学习
2.导致这种趋势的原因是什么
3.我对此的看法
Overseas Study at an Early Age Nowadays more and more parents are
eager to send their children to study abroad before they finish high school by whatever means and at whatever cost.
It is quite understandable for parents to send their children to study overseas because they place high expectations on their children. They are encouraged by the success stories of those who have completed their overseas study. With the development of economy, companies and institutions at home are giving more and more emphasis on overseas experiences, too. Consequently, pursuing overseas study became a kind of short cut（捷径） in gaining a better future. Moreover, there is still one
underlying reason for this rush-economic reason. The rapid economic progress in the past few years in China has enabled more and more parents to afford the huge cost for their children’s overseas study.
As for me, overseas study is surely a helpful way to get both advanced knowledge and necessary experiences, but overseas study at an early age is neither necessary nor benef1cial. The students may be too young to either tend for themselves or think for themselves. I do think that overseas study can contribute to one’s self-improvement, but it’s better to be pursued after one has finished his college study at home, when he is more capable of learning and living on his own.